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@esther-c

Blogger is OK. I like how its really simple to set up and use, but the only bad part is that you cant have an email subscription button and as far as I know you cant customize your backgrounds and have to pick from the few they have. Its very easy to use though, I haven’t tried any other blogging sites, but have been thinking about…[Read more]

@trailblazer

I like these scenes!

@highscribeofaetherium

Lol is Fracture still doing his maniacal laughter, utterly oblivious to everything happening around him? 😂

Yep. XD

Fracture

“You coming?” something poked him. He did the logical thing and screamed.

Rolling away and jumping to his feet in what he hoped was a threatening fighting stance.

“HOW DARE YOU tell ME what to do!”…[Read more]

Ottoline

She had to work with Ellis?

I’m dead. So dead. She wiped her sweaty palms on her pants. Why couldn’t he have paired me with someone who won’t murder me the first chance we’re alone? (I know he wouldn’t actually, but she just is scared of everything, XD)

She was terrified. Terrified of the dragons, of everyone carrying a sword, of El…[Read more]

@smiley

lol!! 😂 I love those memes!!

@highscribeofaetherium

Yep, that is the intention. The question, however, is why?

@jonas

Yeah, although in this story at least, I don’t find Adikar particularly interesting, he’s actually fairly flat. But he would probably be more interesting earlier in his career.

What I would want to see is his degradation into what he eventually became. It would have to be really subtle though, and feel like this could be a process that you…[Read more]

@jonas

Sound good! And what did I miss about teams of two? I see them above, but what are they doing together?

@jonas

I’m assuming you meant ‘Nale’? I think you combined ‘Nale’ and Taln.

Whoops😅

Yeah, I think it might have been largely subconscious on my part, but I definitely see the similarities. What I find intriguing about my character is the differences from Nale or Szeth. The scene is obviously similar to when we first meet Szeth in SA, and the chara…

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@highscribeofaetherium

I started laughing while writing this XD

@jonas

Well…that was intense.

Good job!

@jonas @highscribeofaetherium @rae

Fracture

He heard distant footsteps, but didn’t think much of them. He was too engrossed in his mourning ceremony to give them much thought.

That is, until someone nearly kicked him in the head.

“AAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!” He screamed, his voice cracking horribly halfway through his scream. He jumped to his feet,…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom @jonas

This is indeed a big change. You may be changing a bit too much, while change is good, you can halt your progress completely by making to many revisions (*says as if I wasn’t the most guilty of this exact thing). However, first person can help more with experiential writing, which I think is more your style anyways. I t…

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@thearcaneaxiom

lol 😂 for sure

@grcr

Although another theme is to simply avoid making deals with the devil😅

@thearcaneaxiom

Ohh.. I see.

@grcr

The moral is hypocrisy. To do evil on someone means that you yourself have done evil, regardless of what name you have committed it under.