Scoutillus Finch

@esther-c

I also hope I didn’t come across as rude or brushing you off…I really do appreciate your thoughts because that means I need to work on foreshadowing! And explaining my book to others helps me flesh out my thoughts a little more! Thank you so much! <3

@esther-c

Ok, so the biggest thing I noticed was the lack of hope throughout the story. The characters seemed to think about death a lot and were put through a lot of physical pain. There’s nothing inherently wrong with that, but it needs to be balanced out with hope. When I got to read those Lilitu/Sef memories from when they were little, that w…

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@rae

a picture from a couple years back of him and Nar having a flour fight (he lost)

Aww cute <3

Hopefully Dante isn’t too upset.

Hehe, no, upset isn’t quite the right word. My boy’s got issues.

Dante

Dante slumped to the ground, holding his throat and coughing. He sat there a while in the dimly lit hall, shoulders shaking as he tried to reg…[Read more]

@raxforge (I changed a few things in the story btw) @ellette-giselle @keilah-h @whalekeeper @hybridlore @theducktator

Story 10!

Only two more stories and then The Baron Chronicles will come to a close. Thx for reading this far! 💜

 
Fire
The blaze in the fireplace crackled. Baron balanced a pencil on his hand, staring down at his rose drawing on…[Read more]

@loopylin

… May I ask what’s in Alpha’s pockets?

Alpha’s gonna be so mad lol

•  A pocket knife (are you surprised lol)
• some loose change
• some random things he picked up like an acorn probably (Strange new world, strange new things, random things in pockets)
• a picture from a couple years back of him and Nar having a flour fight (he lost)

@whalekeeper Hey, I noticed a thing. Did you change Seb’s last name?

My favorite type of magic is finding something that’s already true of the world and making it literal

@whalekeeper Thanks <3

I like messing with the idea of a world where almost everything you interact with is alive and has its own character. It’s fun.

@rae

… May I ask what’s in Alpha’s pockets?

@loopylin

Alpha’s reaction.

I apologize to Dante ahead of time. I like you Dante, but Alpha is not a fan.

Alpha

Before Dante could get far, he was pinned against the wall in the hallway outside their room, Alpha’s finger’s wrapped around his throat. A red vapor was thinly veiling Alpha’s eyes. “Watch yourself, Dante. You may think you know a…[Read more]

@loopylin

173 words

Her wide, innocent eyes were of a bluish purple, flecked with white as if some painter had dabbed their brush in white and flicked it with their finger. Then, some magical fairy had come and made all the spots glow like the stars in the sky. Her skin and hair were of similar shades of the bluish purple. Even her little boots…

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@hybridlore

Okay, I wrote 500 hundred words. I won’t post them here though because they’re part of a story I plan to post soon of The Baron Chronicles topic and I really don’t want to spoil what happens in this story.

@theducktator

Liko 

Liko gratefully took the two cookies, feeling very spoiled. He had already been offered sweets by two different students, and he hadn’t even eaten breakfast yet. He thanked her again and then answered her question.

“I think it’s nice here. I like my coworkers. Bit unpredictable though. Lots of different people from lots of…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

(where this super cool person is wearing a mask and then they remove their mask and its a GIRL 😮 nothing against girls being cool, just the trope is over used and I am more surprised when it turns out to be a male rather than a female.)

My least favorite part about this trope is the girl almost always has eyeliner on. Or they’re…[Read more]

Oh and I guess I need to throw some too.

@rae @hybridlore @freed_and_redeemed @hypridlore @theducktator @elishavet-pidyon

Throwing 3 snowballs at each of you

Here’s what I wrote if anyone wants to see:

In the late morning of one wet April day, the rain had cleared enough that Brea Thorne, age six, could go for a walk with her nanny. And she was beyond ready for it. She jumped and skipped along, looping back every once in a while to her slower paced guardian.

It was about fifteen minutes into t…[Read more]

@hybridlore Thanks XD  I needed the motivation. I got a part of a scene that’s been stuck in my head out finally.

If I had any other older snowballs, I’m just going to forget about them lol

@theducktator

Thx!

Who was your favorite?

Also Brian, Kevin, Julie, Terry