Scoutillus Finch

@raxforge @koshka

Eddie

Ed turned to look up at the person talking to them. She squinted.

Foreign Literature. Wasn’t that where they were headed now?

“Lemme consult my map,” she said. She waved at Ellie, who had turned on her earplugs to make it through the crowded hallway.

“What?” Ellie said, tapping the device in her ear. She turned,…[Read more]

@keilah-h

I mean I understand they have to have some water in order to live, but didn’t you say somewhere else that Azers don’t like water? Or did I completely misunderstand and that’s just a Ottoline/Naami thing?

So I’m not completely sure about that XDXD

Mainly, they just are very possessive of their lands and don’t want trespassers XD especia…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Girl you should legit be an editor hahahaha you’ve always been sooooo good with critiques!!!

Thank you so muchhhhh

@whalekeeper aww that’s the cutest <3

Is Barnes wearing her mask? I can’t remember what it looks like.

@freed_and_redeemed

AHHH GIRL I LOVE FANTASY <333333 it’s my favoriteeee I’m so excited!

@the_lost-journal

I skimmed through this, and your WIP’s sound SO COOL!

I love them!

@grcr

Just finished reading through all your chapters… man, I dont even know what to say…

Must read moreeeeee. WRITE WRITE WRITE!

Aw girlie thank you so much… <33

Eloy is my favorite… Aubrielle is probably second. And, since he hasn’t done anything yet that I can see, Cassian is also a fav.

AWWWWW

Why Eloy thoughhhh he kinda just drops off the…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Omc thank you so much girl, that means a lot…you’re gonna make me cryyyy

Ahhh thank youuuu 😭😭💜💜💜💜💜

Your critique was EXACTLY what I was looking for, so thank you!!!

–Characters are very easy to picture, and not very easy to forget. XD So you’re good in that area.

YAYYYY!!! That’s one of the things I was worried about, and I’m s…[Read more]

@keilah-h

yes, actually!!!!!

I think I have a couple more chapters since you last read it!!!

@keilah-h

aw yesss

@keilah-h

I feel like I always write the most when I post on KP or when I know people will read it…

It’s so cool to see writers supporting other writers <3

@whalekeeper

Heeyy Sara, I’m about a third through your story right now! What kind of critique do you want? Any specific concerns, stuff like that?

Ummmm

Let me think lol

I think I’m just worried about pacing, flow of the story, and if it’s at all interesting lol

And character development ideas would be helpful too!!

I also just want to know t…[Read more]

LILITU’S NICKNAME IS TULIPS???????

Yeah lol

you can thank one of the boys from my school for that one XDXD

The frog wedding is adorable.

I KNOWWWW

YOU KILLED NEVEAH?!?!?!

no comment….

@theducktator

 I just finished your prologue. It’s good, but you overuse italics.

NOOOOOO
IT IS IMPOSSIBLE TO USE ITALICS

😱😱😱😱

*sobs hysterically*

Oh my goodness, they kissed!!!!

yesssss

*coughs* um yeah…chapter three is kinda dark I guess 😂😂

@koshka I don’t remember the lyrics very well, but I read that the band does a lot of anti-human trafficking charity work

@whalekeeper

Why thank you. Glad to be your local online conundrum ✨

@theducktator

So like my littlest sister’s nose. XD

No, that’s a boop. Bops are for heads and shoulders. Boops are for noses.

@the_lost-journal

Also, doesn’t Hilda have some… *cough cough* uhhh… LGBTQ things in it…. 😳…. or is that just dumb fan stuff?

dumb fan stuff

@linus-smallprint

I just finished the first Alcatraz book and it is one of my new favorite books. It’s hilarious. I listened to the audiobook in my car and there were multiple times when Al would say…[Read more]

@raxforge Ooo I love Twenty One Pilots. I will check that out later