@savannah_grace2009
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Chase Duke
“My father…well he was my father, only a year ago was he finally…imprisoned. My mother…she died.” Chase tried to hold back the water in his eyes as he saw Sef cry too. He allowed one tear to trickle down his cheek. All the world about him grew fuzzy, except Sef. He didn’t care where he was anymore, or that…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@calyhuge @beth-torres @savannah_grace2009 @trailblazer @acancello @rae @jonas @highscribeofaetherium
you all are the ones who haven’t left the rp right?
ok here we go
Snake
He swooped down and grabbed a few soldiers, flinging them up into the air before freezing them into blocks of ice.
This was more fun than he’d thought.
He barely noticed…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Chase Duke
The scars. They were like copies of his own. He met Sef’s eyes, and his black flickered to brilliant green. He didn’t need to be told, he knew.
“M-my father gave me my scars.” Chase swallowed and his jaw muscles tightened.
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Chase Duke
“I-I’m not sure h-how t-to dance,” Sef whispered. Chase restrained himself from the natural instinct to tense up and pull away as someone touched him, or to try to hide his scars. He knew girls didn’t like scars.
“I-It’ss… That’s, that’s okay. I-I have never…danced before either.” Goose bumps formed on his s…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Chase
Chase saw a trembling girl led by a woman come his way, he shrank back against the wall. He wanted no more visitors.
“Since you have not found partners, I will assign you to practice dancing together.” The woman said as she smiled and left Chase and the other girl alone.
“I-I’m S-Sef,” the girl whispered, hugging…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Lol, don’t we all? 😂
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Ruth replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@jonas @highscribeofaetherium @savannah_grace2009
Today I discovered how fun it is to collect…TIGER PICS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
I love that idea!!! go for it!!!
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
I mean…it depends on what you mean by the inciting incident….I’m new to plotting XD In a way, Neveah being pregnant is the inciting incident, because it triggers a chain reaction that basically turns Sef’s world upside-down. If that makes sense. I’m not sure about if it is the inciting incident or not….but it is definitely so…
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Would you mind adding Sef? I think I’m going to go with her, since Music and Chase are not…connecting really.
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Alrighty! Here we go!
1. Is it boring?? I’ve been really scared that this doesn’t draw you in and isn’t interesting.
Um, I wouldn’t say it’s boring. I think the pacing is pretty good. Honestly, boring is so subjective, so no, it’s not boring. Because I don’t mind things moving a little slower at the beginning. Some people m…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore @vinagirl
Let me know if anything in this scene feels too cliche! I think you’ll like it.
Nearing the end of July, we were spending a Sunday afternoon at the Culliver’s. Etta and Chester were there; it was the first time they’d joined us all since I’d begun talking to them again.
After eating lunch, Oscar and M…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Thank you so much Esther! I’ve been doubting my writing recently and really comparing myself to others, so it makes me happy you like it. I started writing in present tense as soon as I started writing, so after the initial hurdle (it was hard lol, I kept using said) it’s been pretty natural, because I don’t know how write…
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@rae @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @beth-torres @whalekeeper @esther-c @hybridlore @savannah_grace2009 @acancello @loopylin @princesachronicle22 @thearcaneaxiom
Reminder! We’re planning to smash that record into the dust at 5 EST/4 CST/3 MST/2 PST.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
1. Is it boring?? I’ve been really scared that this doesn’t draw you in and isn’t interesting.
Nope!
2. Is Sef relatable? Can you really feel her and does she become real in your mind?
Yes, she’s definitely relatable!
3. Was there anywhere that you were confused?
Hmm, I don’t think so, since I’ve read most of to before, but I d…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
1. Is it boring?? I’ve been really scared that this doesn’t draw you in and isn’t interesting.
Nope! Super intriguing!
2. Is Sef relatable? Can you really feel her and does she become real in your mind?
Very relatable!
3. Was there anywhere that you were confused?
At the end. I don’t think pregnancy is enough to make so…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Heres the answers to your questions!
1. Is it boring??- Nope! I love the characters and how you describe the little things like the table, the trees the overall feel of the room.
2. Is Sef relatable?- Yes! As I’m reading, theres parts that pop out to me like ‘Oh I act just like that, I know how that feels.’ Like when Sefs…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@esther-c @freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @highscribeofaetherium @jonas @whalekeeper @euodia-vision @hybridlore @loopylin @trailblazer @rae @janellebelovedpig @felicity @karissa-chmil @landric @booksbyjayna @everyone!
I DID IT!! I’M DONE WITH THE ROUGH DRAFT OF MY FIRST NOVEL!!!!!!!Oh my gosh this is so…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! I’m typing the last words now😭
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @vinagirl @hybridlore
It was a dry, dry summer. The crops suffered, and Pa worried that they wouldn’t grow to full height in time to produce. There was also the constant fear of prairie fires. Some nights the horizon glowed orange, from the wild, consuming flames miles away.
I finally found the courage to talk to C…[Read more]
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