SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨

@savannah_grace2009 @freedomwriter76

ha ha yeah… I’m counting them and so far I have 335…

They should get an award or something XD

lol

@savannah_grace2009 @jonas

I was thinking the same thing actually. They’re both pretty short, so perhaps you could add a chapter break, but even that isn’t necessary. I know why you did it, in order to have the chapter end on a good emotional climax, so I’d say you can do it either way, but it can still function as one whole scene.

@savannah_grace2009

I like this chapter as well! So for some reason I thought that the Andromedans were not aware of Earth, but if they are, and even know some random facts about it’s current modern day, including some sayings, then Fit as a Fiddle could become a common saying there.

@savannah_grace2009

I haven’t read it yet, but what I immediately thought is, do these have to be separate chapters? It looks like both are Sef chapters, and neither is particularly long, so I don’t see any specific reason to separate them. Like I said, I haven’t read it yet, so maybe there is one.

@savannah_grace2009

lol! Your the one that told me to do it, so…

It’s still up to you though😂

@mineralizedwritings

Yes, he basically broke hundreds of years of tradition and precedence.

@savannah_grace2009

Good! I plan to post more in the future.

@savannah_grace2009 @euodia-vision @jonas @rae

Do it lol

😆

h ttps://www.mote.com/m/darsdx5 (delete the space after the h)

Let me know if it doesn’t work.

@savannah_grace2009

I love it so far! The prose is beautiful, and the story is so good!

Yay! I’m glad!

@esther-c

Oh yeah ofc. I saw the post and I was like, “Welp, Euodia will probably want to hear all about this.” 😂

Haha, you know me very well. 😂

@rae

I think Andy should have gotten an award for how well he played Gollum.

AGREED!!!

@savannah_grace2009

Should I post the next one later today, or wait until tomorrow?

I’m good with whatever you decide!

@savannah_grace2009

I agree with Jonas, this is a really great start! It’s a much more hopeful beginning too, while there may be uncertainty. I don’t have much to say either, other than the fact that “fit as a fiddle” is an English idiom, and would be very unlikely to be seen elsewhere, but that can very easily be fixed or even ignored. You can…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I wouldn’t mind, but I probably wouldn’t be able to read it today. I also am not sure if anyone else has gotten a chance to read Ch 1 yet.

@savannah_grace2009

I didn’t want to spam you guys, lol.

Yeah, thanks. If you scatter the rest throughout the week, I should have time to read them, but yeah, four appearing at once would be panic inducing, lol.

Yeah, I was planning to do either Neveah or Ottoline for the “teaser”, though Neveah’s would make more sense.

You could do both in it,…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Seems like a strong first chapter. I don’t have any feedback apart from that.

So this would be Sef and Lillitu’s book, correct? Imagining it, this structure should work really well! At the end of this one, you should have a epilogue with Neveah as a teaser for the next one.

@savannah_grace2009 @rae

I know. I’ll try to write something tomorrow.

@savannah_grace2009 @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @anyone-reading-this

This RP needs to get active again.

@savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium

Koshtin

In reply to the man’s plead, King Koshtin looked at the white haired woman who had challenged his integrity.

“He is from a world they call Andromeda, I myself have seen it through my magic. I myself chose him from that world. There are not only seven planets, for this is a planet not of the…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @jonas @rae

This is making me want to share audio samples, lol!

I didn’t know about the Gollum juice, but it makes sense. Smaug was played by Benedict Cumberbatch.

@savannah_grace2009

I love Xandro!

Lol, I can totally see some of the horses where I work doing that!