@savannah_grace2009
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
I think that would work yes. If he believed that they simply threw him away, then that would be something that would weigh on him heavily. However if this is to slide into the exposition you gave, that would mean he associates the Pythonos with his parents choice, which would suggest that it wasn’t their fault. This is the…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Fynn
“Am I… is it rude to wear a hood while eating in public?”
Fynn shrugged. “I don’t know. If you want people to avoid you, then sure. If you want to look friendly and approachable, then… probably not.” He hoped he didn’t come across at too blunt or rude. He was just giving Chase the facts.
I’M DYING!!!!!!!!!!! 🤣🤣…
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@thearcaneaxiom @grcr @savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore
Thank you all for your replies!!
I think I’m leaning towards the taking the place of death more now. Thanks!!
And for those of you sobbing over Amir’s death….
Sorryyyyy 😭
It just has to happen. I know it’s gonna hurt writing it, but I also was planning Amir’s death from the very beginning…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
@hybridlore @savannah_grace2009
Thanks! I want to develop their brother-sister relationship more.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Lol (oh, no, but I’VE ALREADY SAID THAT 🙄)
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HighScribe replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Wow, Fracture didn’t even notice that Svlys told him to shut up? I thought he was going to throw a tantrum, for sure! XD
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
@hybridlore @savannah_grace2009
Some more….
A week later, Albert left for Little Springs. He never said goodbye to me, and I wished I could apologize for what I’d said. But I just couldn’t bring myself to do it.
The day after he left, I was in the barn milking our cow, Molly. I heard footsteps enter the barn, and turned to see Abe app…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
This story is so sad! It’s really good though, well done! I don’t think we need to enforce the deadline. I would want ours to be judged in this case, because I went full comedy, and you were much more serious, so it’s not really possible to realistically compare them in a meaningful way. Thanks for the congrats though!
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
Sorry I haven’t responded to this one until now. I think it’s good. All that I would mention is that the history tangent with the pythonos while only a paragraph or two, felt a little sudden. Lilitu is young, and while he may be thinking about these things, I think this part would flow much better if you made it much more of a…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @hybridlore @thearcaneaxiom @rae @grcr @savannah_grace2009 @keilah-h @smiley @sorry-my-brain-broke @anyone-else
I need help.
I’m trying to choose an ending for my novel. I thought I had it figured out, but now I’m doubting it. Either way, someone is going to die, so read at your own risk.
First, her…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
I think I’m gonna add Igua in at the “middle stage” of his life before everyone figures out he’s the mysterious hero.
Uh oh, that’s means we’d either have only Igua or only the Hero. I think I’ll have Togo with his older self or not staytrueto Igua, and I can’t do that to him. I’ll just give him a small touch of insanity.
Oh! After the climax…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@calyhuge @beth-torres @savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @trailblazer @acancello @mineralizedwritings @rae @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @anyone else
I drew Snake being attacked by the creature yesterday! It took me 3 hours lol. I just colored him today.

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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
“Yeah, pizza’s good,” Liv said, her cheeks flushing a darker shade of blue. Fynn smirked at Lukas and elbowed him, pointing with his eyes at Liv. Liv buried her hands in Xandro’s blue mane, trying to distract herself from the embarrasment.
The next few days were sure to be awkward ones, that was for sure.
Awww ᾗ…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 oooh Snake’s definitely gonna apologize for that once he’s awake
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
(Ack! It deleted when I tried to edit!)
@highscribeofaetherium @savannah_grace2009 @rae@calyhugeI’m adding a second character to this RP. Hopefully it will help get it running smoothly again.
Izre
Izre (pronounced ‘eese-RAY’. The ‘r’ is rolled a bit) is a large dragonesque stone creature. On all fours, the top of her back comes up to about 4 f…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@hughscribeofaetherium @savannah_grace2009 @rae @calyhuge
I’m adding a second character to this RP. Hopefully it will help get it running smoothly again.
Izre
Izre (pronounced ‘eese-RAY’. The ‘r’ is rolled a bit) is a large dragonesque stone creature. On all fours, the top of her back comes up to about 4 feet. Standing on her hind legs, she…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
I think every writer has some charries they do that to…though you never saw Nahim with his FAM. It was sweet! So perfect! Then I go and kill them ofc and leave Nahim devastated and depressed, forever physically and mentally scarred. When you see him in character party is after most of that, though he still has nightmares.
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Ruth replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Glace used to be that way like 99% of the time, cracking jokes left and right of all different humor types. Then evil writer Ruee had to go change him to this sad depressed Charrie you saw in that snippet that I posted in Short Short Story prompt war.
I’m upset with myself now!
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Ruth posted an update 2 years, 9 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 Chase needs to find his way out of his hood, but he only can by sharing the deep parts of himself, cuz in himself is not the answer.
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Ruth posted a new activity comment 2 years, 9 months ago
Oh, tag @savannah_grace2009
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That’s how I feel, but my “hood” is my writing and books XD
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