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Cloaked Mystery posted an update 2 years, 10 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium @rae @acancello @keilah-h @beth-torres @calyhuge @trailblazer @esther-c (I think that’s all of our Character Party crew.)
I’m considering undertaking an illustration (or individual illustrations) of all our characters. Could everyone supply me with as much information as possible about their cha…[Read more] -
Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
🤣 Eloy and Cass are the perfect brothers! Please tag me if you write/post more!
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Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
The ones Rae gave you are really good! Have you written the next chapter yet? (I want to see how this ends 🙂 )
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Allison replied to the topic Writing about weddings and kissing and more! in the forum Romance 2 years, 10 months ago
Hugo is so cute! I love him!!! (the ammount of times I’ve said that is concerning…)
Lol! Thank you!!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 10 months ago
I’m not quite sure I get what the “First Plot Point” is and how it’s different from the “Hook.” It says that it “pushes the main character into the central conflict.” Isn’t that what a hook/inciting incident does?
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Allison replied to the topic Writing about weddings and kissing and more! in the forum Romance 2 years, 10 months ago
Heres one scene! (ignore all the mistakes) It takes place just as they are about to get to the capital, Bermill.
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He turned to leave, just as the chair slid out from under Vikii, she shrieked and Hugo spun back towards her and caught her in his arms. “Hey, not too bad, huh?” he smiled, “Got better reflexes than you t…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
or we could kill Fynnor Fynn could go on a trip or something🤣
I don’t know why I find that so funny. That’s like, not healthy. 😂
I don’t approve of him getting killed, but I also don’t mind a little drama between my charries. Fynn could have to leave or something before the dance, then comes back and finds out that Callist…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
I wish I could help but I don’t normally name my chapters (I struggle enough with naming my projects. XD). But I think Rae had some good suggestions. 🙂
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
@ava-blue @savannah_grace2009 Wasn’t sure how to post pics of feathered mushrooms in that other thread, so I shall show you here. :]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Good night! I have to go!
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
I have weird moods where I look up GSW stuff for no reason, also TBI’s, that’s how come I knew about that with Nahim. I have saved articles about extreme stress symptoms (for once, it was actual research for something I am going to put guess who, Nahim, through) and other nights I’m pondering headache-causing charries
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Beth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Carrie did much of nothing, except let her cat destroy some of the castle.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Amir and Hedieh had no POVs during the entire thing, and Kaine, as usual didn’t either.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Yep, jungle is first on the hit list.
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Yes!!! I should do that! Nahim, give Queen Silvae to Fennin and go fall asleep!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
I’m not a fan of these so called “societies.” Plus, we already did make him take a break, (briefly)…sort of.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Alright then! Koshtin sure didn’t do a thorough background check on the “villains” he pulled in.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
@everyone
It’s probably almost time for the quest to begin, right? Since they got attacked, they need to get going quick! They just need to take care of the fire and that nasty Styx.
I thought of a good in universe solution to Lane, Flaz, and Leon. We say that they’re staying behind in case of another attack, and to help train the Lillenings.…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Why is she eating my notifs? I mean, I’ve done nothing to offend her.
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Ottoline has blonde hair that can appear pink depending on the lighting, and light pink eyes. She has a dark red beanie, and various scars on her arms. Umm she wears neutral colors I guess, like tans, greens, etc. (she’s my pfp, but you probably already knew that XD)
Okay. What types of clothing does she wear?
I really don’t know XD I guess I need to do some more worldbuilding! I see her as wearing a tan tee-shirt and some kind of leggings, but idk. Sorry! You can just draw her like that for now, I guess?
Okay.
No, he does not.
How big is his sword? And what does it look like?
Let’s see…
(Hope that works)
Its proportions are similar to that. It’s about 4’… 4”? Maybe? Long.
I’ll get some more detailed descriptions later.
Nahim has the red eyes ofc. Then pitch black hair contrasted to pale skin. His jawline and chin are kinda square. As far as clothes, in normal clothing probably grey or black Realn-style shirts with stiff collars. Pants are durable and easy to move in. Will sketch.
As far as armor goes, I’ll try to send some pics your way Tues Or Wed. Can’t…[Read more]
Alright, great!
I think you said Nora’s armor is blue, red, and white. What color is Nahim’s?
Nahim’s is a grey/black with carton like lightning bolts of bright yellow centers and almost orange outlines.
When I get the chance, the watercolor shows you that stuff.
He also has many armor markings…I tried to explain them, and I accidentally deleted it so, I’ll sketch them. I would wait a little to draw him, he’s kinda complicated.
I got a notification, so I saw it. Am I right in thinking that his weapons are on the right side and the pad where he gives commands to his armor is on the left?
Oh, and what shape are the crystal swords? Are they shaped like a normal blade, or is the blade more jagged and rock-like in shape?
Shaped normally. His is the style that can both slice and puncture.
As far as sides go, Nahim is skilled with a sword with both his left and his right, though prefers his right. Yes, he would hang it usually on the right but sometimes it is on the left. His holster is on the right, and set to be out of the way.
As far as commands go… He usually…[Read more]
Yeah, I get it.
Kari is 5’4″, slender, and fair-skinned. Her blond hair reaches just past her shoulders, and her eyes are a deep blue. She has delicate facial features (slim nose, thinner lips). She often wears jeans (at least during the colder months), with a plain shirt in either forest green, or lavender, or gray. Usually she’ll have a cardigan over that, too.…[Read more]
Carrie is thin and pale with lots of freckles on her face. She has very dark brown short, curly hair and dark brown eyes.
She wears dark colors. I’ll sketch a picture of her outfit tomorrow.
Snake’s name is tiny bit misleading lol. He has normal human body proportions I think. His tail is a bit longer than his legs, and his wings are one and a half times his armspan (but I’m assuming you’d draw them folded, unless he’s flying.)
For a reference picture…I could post one on the chat, because I wouldn’t trust what the internet has done…[Read more]
He also has prominent spikes on his neck and back. I’ll post some pictures of him and other Icewraiths soon.
So he’s basically a human, but more than twice as large, and with wings, a tail, and claws?
Yep, and talons for feet.
Oh, and his wings and tail are a pale teal color. His wings have a few dark green, tiger-like stripes close to where they connect to the body. His tail also has a few of those markings toward the end, and there are six small spikes on the tip–three on each side.
Here’s Hugo’s description..
Hugo is 5 ft 7in tall. Dark brown basically black shaggy hair (The length Grcr did is good) His dark brown eyes are kind of teasing and his face is usually pretty smug.
He can either be wearing a beanie or a backwards baseball cap, whatever’s easier. For shoes, he’s wearing black and white checkered Vans
His outfit…[Read more]
Ok let’s see, um…
So Amir has short, messy, brown hair; hazel (mostly green) eyes; a half-smile/crooked smile; tea colored skin; and soft facial features. I’ll post a pic of his clothing with a few extra details in just a minute. He stands about 5’ 6’’. I think that’s it. Let me know if that’s enough information. (: