@savannah_grace2009
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Chase Duke.
“In a way, you have known me all your life, I guess. I have no doubt you already know my fears, my nightmares, the dark moments when I want to die. The relief of running out to nature where no one is there to hurt me. And if someone knows that about me, about us, they know most of our heart and thoughts already.”…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
Just adding to the list of ship names, eh?
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Smiley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@esther-c @savannah_grace2009 @mineralizedwritings @rae @grcr @freedomwriter76
Okay, so I did it!! I finally wrote a scene for my contemporary story (I’m not honestly sure what book this will be in since I’m planning on writing at least one book in every sibling’s POV) this one is in Colton’s Pov, and just based on this scene I would like to know…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic An aggravation over Stained Glass in the forum Poetry Critiques 2 years, 9 months ago
I’m not sure what to call my style, besides being metered and rhymed. I don’t know a whole lot about poetry, besides a few basic rules.
Hmm, thanks for ideas and feedback!
Thank you! It’s one of my best so far.
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Allison posted a new activity comment 2 years, 9 months ago
Oops forgot your tag @savannah_grace2009
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Chase Duke
Chase sucked in a breath, but he didn’t tense. Sef was worthy to hug him, because she had felt the same pain, the same emotions, the same hardships. He gently hugged her back, closed his eyes and sighed. It felt good to hug someone who actually understood.
I hope Callie’s watching! If I’m not mistaking,…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Chase Duke
“My father…well he was my father, only a year ago was he finally…imprisoned. My mother…she died.” Chase tried to hold back the water in his eyes as he saw Sef cry too. He allowed one tear to trickle down his cheek. All the world about him grew fuzzy, except Sef. He didn’t care where he was anymore, or that…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@calyhuge @beth-torres @savannah_grace2009 @trailblazer @acancello @rae @jonas @highscribeofaetherium
you all are the ones who haven’t left the rp right?
ok here we go
Snake
He swooped down and grabbed a few soldiers, flinging them up into the air before freezing them into blocks of ice.
This was more fun than he’d thought.
He barely noticed…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Chase Duke
The scars. They were like copies of his own. He met Sef’s eyes, and his black flickered to brilliant green. He didn’t need to be told, he knew.
“M-my father gave me my scars.” Chase swallowed and his jaw muscles tightened.
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Chase Duke
“I-I’m not sure h-how t-to dance,” Sef whispered. Chase restrained himself from the natural instinct to tense up and pull away as someone touched him, or to try to hide his scars. He knew girls didn’t like scars.
“I-It’ss… That’s, that’s okay. I-I have never…danced before either.” Goose bumps formed on his s…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Chase
Chase saw a trembling girl led by a woman come his way, he shrank back against the wall. He wanted no more visitors.
“Since you have not found partners, I will assign you to practice dancing together.” The woman said as she smiled and left Chase and the other girl alone.
“I-I’m S-Sef,” the girl whispered, hugging…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Lol, don’t we all? 😂
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Ruth replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@jonas @highscribeofaetherium @savannah_grace2009
Today I discovered how fun it is to collect…TIGER PICS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
I love that idea!!! go for it!!!
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
I mean…it depends on what you mean by the inciting incident….I’m new to plotting XD In a way, Neveah being pregnant is the inciting incident, because it triggers a chain reaction that basically turns Sef’s world upside-down. If that makes sense. I’m not sure about if it is the inciting incident or not….but it is definitely so…
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Would you mind adding Sef? I think I’m going to go with her, since Music and Chase are not…connecting really.
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Alrighty! Here we go!
1. Is it boring?? I’ve been really scared that this doesn’t draw you in and isn’t interesting.
Um, I wouldn’t say it’s boring. I think the pacing is pretty good. Honestly, boring is so subjective, so no, it’s not boring. Because I don’t mind things moving a little slower at the beginning. Some people m…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore @vinagirl
Let me know if anything in this scene feels too cliche! I think you’ll like it.
Nearing the end of July, we were spending a Sunday afternoon at the Culliver’s. Etta and Chester were there; it was the first time they’d joined us all since I’d begun talking to them again.
After eating lunch, Oscar and M…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Thank you so much Esther! I’ve been doubting my writing recently and really comparing myself to others, so it makes me happy you like it. I started writing in present tense as soon as I started writing, so after the initial hurdle (it was hard lol, I kept using said) it’s been pretty natural, because I don’t know how write…
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@rae @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @beth-torres @whalekeeper @esther-c @hybridlore @savannah_grace2009 @acancello @loopylin @princesachronicle22 @thearcaneaxiom
Reminder! We’re planning to smash that record into the dust at 5 EST/4 CST/3 MST/2 PST.
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