SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨

@savannah_grace2009

Before you said that the master wanted to make Jaden his second in command to sweeten the deal. I’m saying that if that’s still the reason, I feel like you should portray Kaden as more hesitant initially, because as it is, it doesn’t really feel like he needed that incentive.

@savannah_grace2009

Yay, another section! 😆 It looks good! I don’t have too much to say about, but I thought Jonas’s critiques were good.

@savannah_grace2009

I think this is really good! You have some really nice prose.

The sensation made her want to scream, cry out in agony…

You don’t really need an ellipsis here. A period would work better.

“It’s those cursed Paynes,” Odessa muttered, anger flashing in her violet eyes.

This makes it sound like Kaden and Sevryn have tried to get…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Yep, I’m still here lol! Good to hear from you.

only two lone figures in the street.

You don’t need “only” and “lone”. I would probably keep “lone”. That one sounds better to me.

Yet every step was marked with purpose, with determination, and—all the more terrifying—desperation.

I’m gonna be a real stickler here, but I don…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I’m sorry you’re going through that. I’ll be praying for her and your family ❤️

Glad to hear that you had a good holiday despite it though

@savannah_grace2009

I’ve been doing pretty well! I don’t know if you’ve heard of YWAM (Youth With a Mission), but I just got back from a 5-month discipleship training school (DTS), which is why I haven’t been active on here. The first three months were training- a lot of teachings on things like the character and nature of God, hearing God’s…[Read more]

@SAVANNAH_GRACE2009

SARRRRAAAA!!! Good to see you!! Ah, I’m glad you’re back—I’ve missed you!!! 😃

 

@savannah_grace2009

I’m sorry to hear about your mom! I’m sure it’s been rough, but I’m also glad Jesus is walking with you through it! I have a friend whose mom was also recently diagnosed with cancer and they’re now moving to another country for more affordable healthcare… it’s been hard for her to have her life upended so suddenly. These…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Heyyy it’s good to see you back again too! I was just thinking about you! What’s new?

@savannah_grace2009

Much better then the first one!!! I like it so much!!

I’m always rewriting my prologues too. Just something about beginnings ya know.

@savannah_grace2009 you’re very welcome!!

I love stories which have imaginative creatures like yours in them.

@savannah_grace2009

Oh no why was it sad?

@savannah_grace2009 hi again!!! I’ve missed hearing about your story–it’s amazing and I look forward to seeing it again!

Happy Thanksgiving everyone! I drew the Over the Garden Wall brothers in celebration.

@loopylin @rae @mineralizedwritings @savannah_grace2009 @theshadow @esther-c @keilah-h @hybridlore @linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle @godlyfantasy12 @freed_and_redeemed

@savannah_grace2009

we’ve already been talking, but so good to see you again!

@savannah_grace2009

Hi, good to see you! How was your thanksgiving?

@whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009 HIII!!! It’s sooo good see yall!!! (Thru the inter webs of course ROFL) Things are pretty good! Have some personal stuff going on but yea, im super excited about vacation in December. Ready to have some weeks off from work lol.

@savannah_grace2009

I’m so glad you’re feeling better about being creative again! I don’t know exactly how you were feeling, but you never have to feel ashamed of your own story’s worth. It’s great to see you feeling better. :]

Goodness gracious, everyone likes to scare me half to death…

@savannah_grace2009 I’m blaming you too *glares suspiciously* ;P

@loopylin

@ellette-giselle

@trailblazer

@savannah_grace2009

@stephie

@grcr

@jonas

@hybridlore

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@freed_and_redeemed

@mineralizedwritings

@whalekeeper

 

Just in case anyone is backing out because they don’t have animal characters, let me say: that’s okay.

 

You can create an animal character, or you can actually…[Read more]