SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨

@savannah_grace2009

I know I miss them, it was such a fun and colorful family

I don’t know where Kelly went, she kind of just disappeared, what’s really annoying is that her last episodes were about her becoming a Christian, but we never find out if she stays with the Washingtons or not

@savannah_grace2009

And then something came over her.

In one deft motion, she let go of his hand and shoulder and wrapped her arms around his waist, pressing the side of her face against his vest in an embrace. She took a few shuddering breaths, trying to keep control of herself. She was not going to cry.

Once Hugo recovered from his shock, she…

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@savannah_grace2009

Well, I haven’t totally developed his character yet

Like I said, that’s fine. I just think these are good things to be thinking about.

he gets a lot of his confidence from relying on himself and that he can basically do anything he wants in Erstonia, so he’s kind of entitled.

I do find it a bit unlikely that his confi…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I just read chapter 10. I think Marcurious is a really cool character. There’s two main things I wonder: where does he get all his confidence? And what is he afraid of? You don’t have to answer these right now, but I think they’re definitely things worth exploring in the story, especially the second. So far  whenever we see h…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @trailblazer

I’m definitely Mandy, I relate to her personal struggles and she can also be a goody to shoes but she’s also clever and can be snarky, she can be insecure which I relate to a lot

I can also lean toward Zoe too

I loved the mulligans!!! and we never got to see any episodes of Tony and Brianna (they were the two…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Yeah and it would be easy to bring back guy characters because they could just get new actors… Their voices would have changed anyway. The female roles would be a little harder, though.

But this would be a really fun RP idea… Everyone chooses an old character and we bring them all back as adults!

Rand the Barkleys- they…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Yeah honestly, I don’t think it’s such a bad thing to be a goody-two-shoes either. I used to be super picky with some things though, and even now I still have different standards for things than most youth, but I don’t judge other people for making different choices anymore like I used to.

It’s been a little while since I…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Ok, awesome! I’ll take a look then!

@savannah_grace2009

You definitely fixed a lot. Though I still think you got to connect the chapters a bit more, like how did Lilitu and Sef end up in the woods and why are they being hunted, as well as their relationship. You’ve might have already done this though, and simply not posted it on KP, have you done it on reedsy already, I’ll have to check.

@savannah_grace2009

Alright, sounds good. 😅 It was a pretty big gap… 😶

@acancello @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @grcr @savannah_grace2009 @trailblazer

Ok, since we have a weird guy to girl ration, I’ll go ahead and add in Hedieh. It’ll be fun. 😉

Amir

Amir squirmed in his seat, trying to get comfortable. He hated wearing this tight-fitting suit, but if it was for tradition, then he told himself he wou…[Read more]

@esther-c @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @grcr @savannah_grace2009 @trailblazer

Heres a short one that might get the party started!

Hugo

Hugo waited on the couch for Ottoline to get ready, he could only imagine how she looked with makeup on. He had a nice chat with Amir, Lane and David who were already dressed up in suits like…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I will see if I can write one today or tomorrow! Also, I am sure that Hugo will dance with Ottoline, but group dances would be fun! Maybe some boys should bring dates since we hardly have any girls? Or do you think that would be to crazy? (Sorry if someone already asked that!) 😀

@savannah_grace2009

Hi! That’s so cool that you play all those instruments! I absolutely love music, and am of the opinion that it is one of God’s most beautiful creations.

Yes, I would love to be tagged for you WIP posts!

@savannah_grace2009

Thanks.

Wait, does that mean Nahim is in a ball? Or no? I’m still confused.

@savannah_grace2009

Dancing the macarena…lol

I straight up refused to do that when told to….

@trailblazer @savannah_grace2009

That wouldn’t be a bad idea either, though! 😮

@savannah_grace2009 @grcr

This is totally out of the norm for anything Victorian era but what if they did some group dances?

@savannah_grace2009

Well, like Solfyre pointed out, that depends on how much space the map covers. If it’s a world map, such details should be ignored, if it’s a city map, you could do it, but it can be hard depending on the size of the paper you have to make it, unless you can do it digitally. With city maps, as well as the level of detail you…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Alright! Sounds good.

Hmmm… Lane can definitely sit it out for now… unless he’s needed…