@savannah_grace2009
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @acancello @grcr @esther-c @jonas @rae @trailblazer
Kaine leans against the old wooden window sill. Steady rain patters the outside of the glass, obscuring the faint glow of starlight. He stares at the three moons hanging in the sky, creating a light reflection in the collecting puddles. Kaine presses his face onto the…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Aww thanks 😊 He’s one of my favorite characters
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @acancello @grcr @mineralizedwritings @esther-c @jonas @rae
Kari
God, what is happening? Kari silently prayed. Then she frowned. God, I’m assuming you created this world, too, if you created Earth. At least, I hope you did. If you didn’t, and you can’t hear me, then I have a major problem.
Since she became a Christian, Ka…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @acancello @trailblazer @grcr @mineralizedwritings @esther-c
NAHIM
Nahim started awake, ashamed that he had slipped off to sleep in a place where he didn’t feel safe. The house rumbled below him and a feminine voice boomed in his ears. With haste, he put his helmet on and stood, walking over to where two strangers that he had…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Oooh, I like it!
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Alrighty, I’m adding my second character… My boy Flazzy (just forget his last name for now…)
Flaz is 15 years old and stands 5 foot tall. His jet-black hair is shaved on one side of his head, and it always looks shiny in the moonlight. He has sandy beige skin, a button nose, and naturally pinkish lips. His monolid eyes have a…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
If that is what happened, I bet she’ll try to rejoin… but I guess we’ll see.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
You can start tagging me, but I am subscribed to this forum so I’ll be notified anyway. What do you mean slowly transition? I was under the impression that this entire house was about to be transported into another dimension. Do you mean that you’ll start building to that but you won’t just immediately jump to it?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @mineralizedwritings @trailblazer @grcr @rae @esther-c
If you do that, I think I’ll join. My character would just arrive separately though. If people don’t want to change this RP, we could just start Rae’s idea as a separate one.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
I don’t mind if you do it… or I’ll do it if you don’t want too… I’m good with whatever….
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hybridlore replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @janellebelovedpig
Do you guys think it was an accident? Just really weird, she didn’t say anything about it. And she seemed like she was posting more often, too :/ -
Esther replied to the topic ✨ WIP Rant Chat!!! ✨ in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Thanks!!
@savannah_grace2009 @euodia-vision
Sooo…what’s the big secret about Amir’s parents?
Hehe… Ok. So it’s a working idea, and it may change eventually as I flesh out the story more, but basically his parents are double agents. They actually work for the shah and are 100% loyal to him. But as part of that work, they pret…[Read more]
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hybridlore posted a new activity comment 2 years, 11 months ago
@euodia-vision @savannah_grace2009
Okay, good XD I think they worked.
@freedomwriter76
Oh okay, thanks. It just wasn’t showing the topic in recent topics, but I know KP goes through a lot of glitches so I’m glad it still works! -
TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
@jonas @highscribeofaetherium @savannah_grace2009
What are y’all’s thoughts on my depiction of Thing?

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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
What might help is to remember that you don’t have to choose them because you like them better. You should choose the ones that have the most interesting POV and character development.
Personally, I would say that the best three to pick would be Ottoline, Marcurious, and either Lilitu or Sef. And then the other two c…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
It’s so hard to just pick one main character out of the set of five, though! I love all them equally!!! XD
You could pick more than one. One thing to think about is that if there are characters that spend most of their time in a group, you could have one of those be a less frequent POV than the other.
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore
Oh no! 😢 Awh, she will be missed.
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
It’s so hard to just pick one main character out of the set of five, though! I love all them equally!!! XD
That’s fair. I think you can make it work as well, it is harder for smaller stories though, but not impossible.
This is funny, to me it feels like they’re my best friends and if I choose one over the other they’ll get m…
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