SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨

@savannah_grace2009

Any specific details/objects and what’s the aesthetic theme color?

@savannah_grace2009

Sure! I will try to get to it either tomorrow or the next day, okay?

@savannah_grace2009

I really like it!!

I don’t have any critiques right now because my writer brain is a little dead from working on my NaNo project. XD But I’ll try to come back to it later and look over it a little more closely. 😊

@rae

Fynn

“N-no, n-not really. Not yet anyways. ” Chase removed his hood, revealing a head of dark hair and eyes with pitch black iris’s. He gave the two boys a wobbly smile.

“Woah,” Fynn said. “Your eyes are so cool! Where are you from?”

Lukas elbowed him in the gut.

“What? I think they’re cool.”

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@savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium

Ikr? 😂

@savannah_grace2009
I’d never read them before, and I’m on the return of the king!

@savannah_grace2009

I’m glad it’s helped you! Yeah, I’d never heard of sprints before this, but it’s been helpful for me too!

@highscribeofaetheirum @jonas @rae @savannah_grace2009

Kian

Kian crossed his arms watching the chaos unfold before him. These people really couldn’t get along, could they? At least nobody had died yet. Kian hated watching others die… if it weren’t for a… good cause.

He rolled his eyes, watching two of them argue over whether one was lying or…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Oh, Marcurious, you’re in for a rude awakening.

Vethe

Vethe seethed. “I’ve been to all twelve planets!” She shouted after him, “There is no Andromeda! There are no more planets! I come from no place!” She looked around for something to throw at him. “And how can I know that that isn’t a lie?”

@savannah_grace2009

She’s very stubborn and deeply mistrusting. To add to that, she’s been thrown…[Read more]

idk if my first post went through… lets try again! it saaaays it went through but I don’t see it…

@esther-c

THANK YOU FOR TAGGING MEEE!!!!!!! 😂😂

@savannah_grace2009

Hey, hey, HEY!!!

So I’m a BIG Tolkien fan!!!

I’m actually listening to the fellowship of the ring rn on audio. I found Andy Serkis, the actor who plays Gollum in the…[Read more]

Koshtin

Koshtin stood from his throne, his eyes gleaming with glee.

“You were chosen well! Welcome to Gilgan, I hope you enjoy your star, because you will not leave until I say you do.” He smiled evilly.

Koshtin wouldn’t have let them actually kill each other, at least not all of them, if one couldn’t survive, he didn’t belong. @savannah_g…[Read more]

@jonas @highscribeofaetherium @rae @savannah_grace2009

I can have Kian intervene. I don’t know what good that will do, but we’ll see.

Kian 

Kian couldn’t hide his surprise when the man who had been shapshifting, suddenly shifted into a fire-breathing dragon. Kian didn’t mind some violence, but this was going too far. If he wanted these people t…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

So what limitations are there on Marcurious’ shapeshifting? Does the thing he’s turning into have to even exist?

Zash

Zash whipped around as the shapeshifter exploded into a dragon. Are you kidding me? thought Zash. That doesn’t seem fair.

He shot a knife, but it couldn’t get through the scales. He used his knives to launch himself off the ground. Go for the eyes, he thought. He sent one of his knives towards the dragon’s face…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Ok. That makes sense.

Yeah, I’ll try to think on it and see what you’re seeing. 🙂

@savannah_grace2009

Umm… there might be a stable, but idk. You can just create one if you want, or she can literally bring the horse into the school to create some chaos if you want. XD

@highscribeofaetherium @jonas @rae @savannah_grace2009

Kian

Kian cocked as his head as he sauntered into what looked like a throne room. But it was no throne room like the one in the shah’s palace in Rashkitan. Everything here seemed more grand and glorious, unlike the shah’s simple grandeur of his throne room.

Two people fighting each oth…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I think it’s fine. I don’t think there’s anything wrong with it except a few technical things which don’t really matter right now. I’m assuming this is a flashback, right?

You said it feels out of place in your book, so check to make sure that this flashback is establishing or foreshadowing something. Like, establish…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Heyyy welcome!

You can start her wherever you want. I have like six or seven charries in this RP (😐) so I have plenty to RP as if you want Livia to meet someone. But there’s also a lot of other people in here too who’d probably have characters to meet her. 🙂 She can share a dorm with my character Callista if you want. 👇 (Be…[Read more]