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🤣 Eloy and Cass are the perfect brothers! Please tag me if you write/post more!

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The ones Rae gave you are really good! Have you written the next chapter yet? (I want to see how this ends 🙂 )

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 Hugo is so cute! I love him!!! (the ammount of times I’ve said that is concerning…)

Lol! Thank you!!

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I’m not quite sure I get what the “First Plot Point” is and how it’s different from the “Hook.” It says that it “pushes the main character into the central conflict.” Isn’t that what a hook/inciting incident does?

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Heres one scene! (ignore all the mistakes) It takes place just as they are about to get to the capital, Bermill.

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He turned to leave, just as the chair slid out from under Vikii, she shrieked and Hugo spun back towards her and caught her in his arms. “Hey, not too bad, huh?” he smiled, “Got better reflexes than you t…[Read more]

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or we could kill Fynn or Fynn could go on a trip or something

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I don’t know why I find that so funny. That’s like, not healthy. 😂

I don’t approve of him getting killed, but I also don’t mind a little drama between my charries. Fynn could have to leave or something before the dance, then comes back and finds out that Callist…[Read more]

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I wish I could help but I don’t normally name my chapters (I struggle enough with naming my projects. XD). But I think Rae had some good suggestions. 🙂

@ava-blue @savannah_grace2009 Wasn’t sure how to post pics of feathered mushrooms in that other thread, so I shall show you here. :]
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Night’s scream

A manith’s call

Midnight’s shock

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Good night! I have to go!

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I have weird moods where I look up GSW stuff for no reason, also TBI’s, that’s how come I knew about that with Nahim. I have saved articles about extreme stress symptoms (for once, it was actual research for something I am going to put guess who, Nahim, through) and other nights I’m pondering headache-causing charries

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Carrie did much of nothing, except let her cat destroy some of the castle.

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Amir and Hedieh had no POVs during the entire thing, and Kaine, as usual didn’t either.

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Yep, jungle is first on the hit list.

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Yes!!! I should do that! Nahim, give Queen Silvae to Fennin and go fall asleep!

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I’m not a fan of these so called “societies.” Plus, we already did make him take a break, (briefly)…sort of.

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Alright then! Koshtin sure didn’t do a thorough background check on the “villains” he pulled in.

@everyone

It’s probably almost time for the quest to begin, right? Since they got attacked, they need to get going quick! They just need to take care of the fire and that nasty Styx.

I thought of a good in universe solution to Lane, Flaz, and Leon. We say that they’re staying behind in case of another attack, and to help train the Lillenings.…[Read more]

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Why is she eating my notifs? I mean, I’ve done nothing to offend her.

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How do you guys come up with this stuff? IT’S SO GOOD! I could never. I should hire you peoples to make magic systems for me, lol

Thanks! It isn’t easy for me. This one has been marinating in my brain for a long time, and it’s still only half-baked. Like if you asked me to just come up with one right now, I couldn’t come up wi…[Read more]