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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
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Euodia posted a new activity comment 1 year, 9 months ago
@savannah_grace2009
HIII! *hugs* Aw thank you so much for checking in, that means a lot. <3 I miss you too! I've been doing good! This summer has been very busy with various activites, mostly 4H related things. But I'm having a blast! I just recently came home from a week of being a camp counselor. How have you been?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago
Is that a threat? Do that and I will give you the climax chapter and then wait FIVE MONTHS to post the rest. So there. I can play this game too ya’ know.
Ok, give me a second. or two. or three. or fifty. I have to check it over for super bad edit mistakes.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago
Oooo, you care about him already!!! That’s AWESOME!!!
Hmm, I think I’ll wait a day or two to post the next scene……….
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
HE HAS A TRAGIC BACKSTORY
trust me you will change your mind
maybe. I’m not so sure. Tragedy is No excuse.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
well, for now I don’t like him. We’ll see after I read the book if I change my mind…..
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
because, Sara, he is clearly evil. I never like the badguys, and the misunderstood villains are the LITERAL WORST so that better not be what he is. Whatever sad background he might have, that is NO excuse for him being evil, which he clearly is.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Awwwwww!!! So sweet! Super cute.
Only critique would be this line.
looking at her mahnith one last time, before leaving her mahnith
It’s a little repetitive. Otherwise, I love it!
Also, how old are the kids now?
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HighScribe replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
@savannah_grace2009
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I don’t hate Hans, I’m just pretty much indifferent on the subject.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
yeah, go ahead and call backup. You’re gonna need it.
High five!
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Except the people who don’t love him.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Ok, whatever. I guess I’ll just try to deal wh=ith it. It’s been doing since I started being on here.
I can say what I like, thank you very much. It is America after all.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago
@linus-smallprint @theshadow @savannah_grace2009
Next section!!
It was nearly dark when the two rose to head back to the house. Turin laid a hand on Aaron’s shoulder. “Aaron, I am sorry,” he said.
“What for?” asked Aaron.
“For the way I have treated you and encouraged Sabina to treat you. We were both wrong, and I am most to blame,” s…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Yep.
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I haven’t seen it eat any posts recently, have you? Not since Kathleen banished Wyoh from KP.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 honestly, the only thing about your story that I found iffy for me was the whole Rath-doing-what-he-did-to-Sef’s-mom thing, and I already stated that that’s ok to leave in there if you warn people what they’re getting into before they start the book. Like @ellette-giselle said, Wingfeather and Green Ember have had their…[Read more]
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Yesss of course!!!! (I’m up to 38K on my WIP, most of which is unedited cringy stuff, but hey, I’m making progress!!! haha!) Oh yes, I’m sooo busy with 4H too!!!! I have a steer, a sheep, chickens, and my dog! What do you do for 4H?
I was basically a counselor at my camp too! I loooovvvveeee camp, it’s so much fun!
Awww yeah, Pinterest is being…[Read more]
Oh shooot, never replied to this, haha
Oooh, you do 4H too?? That’s fun! I show market chickens, markets turkeys, rabbits, and dairy goats. Then I do various life skills, this year I did photography. This is my last year of 4H cuz I be too olllld, and I’m so sad!!! 😭
The camp I was a couneslor at was actually a 4H camp!!! And YES!!! Agreed, I LOVE…[Read more]
You’re good!!!!!!!!
I did market chickens before too!!!!!!! I also do veterinary science!
Aww so sad!
Fun fun! I’ve never been to 4H camp but it sounds great!!!
Funnn!!! How did you do with market chickens? I won grand champion last year which was AMAZING!!
Yes, 4-H camp is SO fun!!!
I have never won Grand Champion (that’s my fault because I used dual purpose chickens instead of broilers and didn’t give them enough time to grow and get finished by fair) but I’ve won reserve champion! The first year I did it I got $900 which was INSANE!!!!!!!! Fair prices are CRAZY here…people have made $1000 for a market pair of…[Read more]
That’s exciting!! Yeah market animals sell for SO much at my fair! My brother got almost $4,000 for his grand champion market chickens the year after Covid!! I sold my grand champion chickens for $2,500 last year! 🫨
WHATTT 😳 I need to come to your fair XD XD And I thought our prices were high! But that’s awesome because it doesn’t cost much money to raise chickens so when you get that much money back it’s really great!!