@savannah_grace2009
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Kefa replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 weeks, 4 days ago
😯
it is a little confusing…
it’s my FAVORITE show of all time hahaha
Oh, I… hmmm… ehhh… I guess my favorite show is something that isn’t christian so….
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TheShadow replied to the topic Scenes in the forum Plotting 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Yeah, as long as you put a TW, I don’t think it matters.
Okay, perfect. First, have to clear out all of the uh… wonderful writing before posting it.
What?? XD
Lol, I was rewatching an episode from Martha Speaks (I don’t care if it’s for kids it’s one of the greatest shows ever), and this line really spoke to me.
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Andrew posted an update 2 weeks, 5 days ago
@savannah_grace2009 ugh! My original post didn’t do its thing.
You’re at 2772 post! Patterns!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
I’m glad it helped! I knew a lot of it was randomness, but when I can look at my difficulty in a new light, everything can start to click. Randomness that really doesn’t fit is typically what I use like. XD
I was trying to imply with that part, how Neveah’s heart broke for Sef. Putting myself in Neveah’s shoes, nothing wou…
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Wow. That’s dark. Pretty good story-wise, though. I’ll just go on a rabbit trail of plotting and hope it gives ideas. XD
I liked how you had Neveah try to combat the lie, and it’s obvious it’s for Sef’s sake, not her own. To make this sequence really work, maybe make Sef think her Mani is just trying to save herself – it’s…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Ooo, lies. XD if I remember right, they want to start with little lies (because they’re more believable) and then work toward bigger lies with more power. So here are some ideas for chains of lies.
“You should be able to be strong enough on your own” (so when you falter, “you must be a failure” can follow)
“If God loved you,…[Read more]
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Kefa replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
omc…you’re gonna make me cry…that’s so sad! I’m so sorry that people said that to you…I hope you know it’s not true and that NO ONE should EVER talk that way to another person! That makes me really mad actually, like why do people have to be so mean?!?
Eh, it is fine. I have already forgiven them! Also I agree though.
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Kefa replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 weeks, 5 days ago
I find it decent. I like watching it with my mom, it is a special thing we do, but tbh I will not freak out about.
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Kefa replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
“You are just a waste of space, you have no value here, nor anywhere. There is no need or use for you, and everything would be better if you were not here.”
Those are things people have told me 😁 so I have experience with a lot of insults! 🥲…😀…
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Trailblazer replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Can it be any lies or does it have to be something that has to do specifically with Pythonos? I’m not familiar enough with your stories to help if they have to be specific, but I might be able to give a few suggestions otherwise.
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Esther replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
I haven’t started it yet, but I will have read all of it by the end of February. Once I read it all, I’ll give you my overall impression and thoughts! :))
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Okay. Don’t worry, I didn’t think she had become is is on the path to becoming a Pythonos at this point.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Didn’t Sef turn herself in so they wouldn’t take her mother instead?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
I haven’t gotten any further, sorry. It slipped my mind, and then school hit and I don’t have much time each week. You can keep tagging me though, and I’ll read more whenever I get more time.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Sorry, I made it up to where Sef turns herself into the Pythonos and they mark her, but haven’t touched it for a while and keep on forgetting to do so. I’ll try to read more soon!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Thank you.
It was someone I didn’t know, but there’s still a lot of craziness. We’re leaving for Idaho on Saturday, so you can guess it’s a little hectic. 😉
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
We had a death in the family and I’m super busy, but I’ll see what I can do.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Yup yup. I was actually thinking about it yesterday. A little busy right now, but I planned to read and catch up very soon. 😉😁
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The Most Esteemed Feathered One replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
I haven’t started it yet, but I will later this week. Maybe tomorrow, since I’m probably too sick for co-op.
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whaley replied to the topic First Draft Blues in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks ago
As long as you love it and it contains a piece of your heart, that’s all that matters. <3
I’m not sure how to feel about this. I feel more as if I’m trying to put my heart into it, and I haven’t found the way to express it in writing format. But thanks for the encouragement. 😁
If this were the case, then w…
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