SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨

@savannah_grace2009

It’s been a bit since I gave you any feedback, so sorry about that. (It was partially KP’s fault—everything was super messed up and I couldn’t post.) I am going to try to do a feedback session tomorrow morning. I have been reading everyone’s comments though, and I wanted to jump in here.

In regards to the Cassian discussio…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

OH. so I didn’t have to go from page one and work my way up.

You could have said that sooner.

@savannah_grace2009

Ugh, I can’t find it. I must be blind.

@savannah_grace2009

No, I haven’t. let me go take a look.

@savannah_grace2009

Oh I get that. I just mean there was no him thinking he was perfect at all. Like, it seemed to me, the reader,  that he was a humble and loving guy who wanted the best for sef and his brothers. There needs to be a little bit of that arogance showing. just a tiny bit. otherwise it’s not real. Ya know?

@savannah_grace2009

Nooooooo no spoilers 🫣

@savannah_grace2009

Oooooo I LOVE this!!!

Ok, one thing,

You see, Cass has a subconscious drive to pump himself up. He feels insecure about himself, so he manipulates situations in order to get people to look up to him or get praise. He doesn’t fully realize that he’s doing that to Sef, but it’s all a selfish desire to get those feeli…

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@savannah_grace2009

Aw, that’s so sweet. It’s always so fun to find a character you can relate to!

Ah, thanks for the heads up! I’ll go see right now.

@savannah_grace2009

Thank you so much!

You like Sabina? Do you see redemption in her, or are you just hoping?

K y’all, here’s the next part. @linus-smallprint @savannah_grace2009 @theshadow

As Aaron stood and spoke to the people, he knew this time something was different. He could feel the Lord working among them, and he could see in their expressions that their eyes were being opened.

By noon, several villagers had come to faith, and once it started, it…

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@savannah_grace2009, @keilah-h, @theshadow, @stephie, @loopylin

I will be working on Chapter the 8th this week. In the mean time, here are some more fun facts about a couple more characters.

Alan Wherl

Age: 22

Race: Wizard (though still mostly human)

Dominate Hand: Left

Favourite Ice Cream: Chocolate

Occupation: Solider

 

Trivia:

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@savannah_grace2009

What did I say! I knew there was something more to Eloy! I really like him now.

Cass is a jerk.

@savannah_grace2009

Hey girl! I love how consistently you’re working on this! Here’s a small critique which you don’t need to read right now if it will potentially overwhelm you ❤️

You’re so selfish…you’re a horrible friend, why do you think she’d ever want you, little Payne?

You shouldn’t even be alive.

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Don’t tell anyone…they…

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@savannah_grace2009

Sef and Lilitu are adorable, dandelions are beautiful, and Eloy is way better than Cassian. AND YOU INCLUDED THE TOAD. OH MY GOODNESS!!!!!! I’M SO HAPPY!!!!!!

@savannah_grace2009

Thanks for reading it!!!!!!! <3

Your welcome! 🙂

Idk if I’d call it a resistance, but all I can say is that light always prevails over darkness!!!!!!!!!

Ooh, can’t wait to see what happens!

@savannah_grace2009

Hi!! Sorry I haven’t responded for a while. I’m all caught up with your book, and so far, I think it’s really good! Lilitu and Sef’s struggle feels pretty realistic, although sometimes I get a little annoyed at the Pythonos sincwe they’re so ruthless. That’s good though, because it gets across that they’re evil and evil can…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

Ouch. 😂

@savannah_grace2009

At first I didn’t like Eloy either…but I felt bad for him so now I do XD

It’s hard to dislike characters I feel bad for.

@savannah_grace2009
Oh…

*looks back*
Nah, it’s fine, I’m just blind, apparently.

@grcr @keilah-h @savannah_grace2009

Praying for all of you ladies!! ❤️