SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨

@savannah_grace2009 @whalekeeper @ellette-giselle I feel like this story forum isn’t the best place for that though.

I think one of you should tag the others in a status update and go at it there. Discussing it here is just gonna ruin the experience of anyone who’s just trying to read the story and has to sift through 3 pages of arguing about a…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009 @ellette-giselle WHOA WHOA WHOA I DID NOT MEAN TO START A FIGHT.

I’m more inclined to agree with Whaley and Sara’s point of view out of personal experience, but it’s Ellette’s story, and she can do whatever she wants. It’s just as someone who’s closer to 18 than 17, it was weird to me that Sabina’s considering…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

@savannah_grace2009

look you two. I do not believe the way you do, and that’s not going to change.

I think this needs to end.

@savannah_grace2009 @ellette-giselle

I’m not here for critique. I’m just here bc this is an interesting discussion, and I know a friend of a friend who’s getting married soon so it’s on my mind.

Whether or not the marriage lasts, it’s important to have a healthy relationship with your partner. If the marriage lasts but it is a bad relations…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

well I’ve read a TON of books about Christian marriages and Biblical courtship/dating and I have never read that! Plus, I have witnessed a TON of beautiful marriages that started very young and have gone on for years!

look. Marriage is permanent. I don’t know why you keep saying it doesn’t last when you start young. I don’t…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Also, when you get married young, it usually doesn’t last…people change so fast and the people I’ve talked to that got married young say that if they could have done it over, they would have married the same person, but waited a LOT longer.

this is completely untrue and is a lie our society wants us to swallow.

as for t…[Read more]

@loopylin @mineralizedwritings @savannah_grace2009 @rae @freed_and_redeemed @anyone

I am so happy right now guys 👀 I found the perfect ending to my project. Like, I just can’t right now. And I won’t say what it is because the joy is in the foreshadowed surprise, but aagh – and it came from my plot board!! All I had to do was look at what was s…[Read more]

@theshadow

Thank you! I’m so glad you like it!
I’ll keep the 23rd in mind.

@savannah_grace2009

Well thank you so much for the help that you did give me! I’ll miss you!

@ellette-giselle

 Don’t you find it a little funny that Aaron is the one to bring the kids back after being the strongest opposer of the idea?

There is an irony in that, which was why I thought the chapter was good. I read the last section you posted as well.

“Finnick is fifteen. In a few years he could find a place of his own,” offered Sabina…

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@savannah_grace2009 @whalekeeper

Someone is having a hard time staying off until Christmas. lolololololol 😀

You might need to try outlining books based on a plot structure…like the Three Act Structure, because it hooks your readers more and you can kind of sense them pushing toward a goal.

Hmmm, well, I have to disagree. I will NEVER start a…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @ellette-giselle
I can try XD
I think the focus needs to be waaay deeper. The writing is very much outside the characters’ perspective, and only tells the bare points of the story. So the orphanage endeavor feels random.
To compare it to something, the perspective is like a bird high in the sky. Everything below looks like doll…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I generally cry by myself too. Talking to people is too awkward.😬 Ugh.

@savannah_grace2009

Glad to see someone else feels the same XD Life is hard, that way.

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @smiley @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @koshka @whalekeeper @loopylin @kyronthearcanin @grcr @rae @savannah_grace2009 @euodia-vision @elishavet-pidyon @anyone-else @I’m-too-overwhelmed-to-remember-tags-lolllll

I’ve been inactive on KP for the past several days, I know XXD It’s been a crazy past few days, esp…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint @theshadow @whalekeeper  @savannah_grace2009(I’ll tag you in case you still want to keep reading this)

Ok, here is the next part. It’s pretty short, but i have some edits to run on the part after, which is very long.

It took some time for the crowd to disperse. Only one child had believed, but Aaron was far from discouraged.…

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@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @loopylin @stephie @theshadow @savannah_grace2009 (I know you are taking a break from Kingdome Pen, Sara, so I will just tag you this final time until you return)

Since Wyoh or whatever we are calling the creature that is currently devouring images is on the loose, I will share images of my characters through other…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 Thank youuuuuuu. and yes, Riker deals with a lot of trouble😅😅