Sara

@savannah_grace2009

um….. 90% of them I made up…… a few my dad and brothers say…… and the other couple were on a word document of quotes I’ve collected.

Let’s see…..

Most of Evan’s are from the letters of ww2 pilots, the “what are we waiting for” and “I know the other stuff was me” are direct lines from the book.

For Ron, the…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Oops I forgot to mention that I deleted the scene with her not wanting to talk to the Great One…so now it’s just the scene with her and Lilitu pretending to be animals.

Gotcha! That makes much more sense. 😀

@savannah_grace2009

Really good! I liked it a lot.

Ok, the only thing is, it seems seems now she as a relationship with The Great One, and wasn’t the last chapter her not even wanting to talk to Him? I’m a little confused at the jump there. Other then that, I loved it!

@esther-c @savannah_grace2009 can I come to the rescue and make things interesting? 😈

@rae @everyone do we have bullies? Also how many people are actually writing here?

In the mean time with the few brain cells left from camp I will proceed to try to make something happen

@whaley

Kate

The boy on the shield stirred, murmured, and then screamed…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

So I really want to keep reading your story, and I need to double check—are the chapters you’re sharing on here in the Reedsy link you shared with me? Or is the link an older draft?

@jonas @freed_and_redeemed @savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium @rae

btw, anyone interested in taking a look at the character boards I just finished up?

@ellette-giselle @savannah_grace2009

Writing sprints are really fun! So are crawls… which is something similar, but it’s longer and more involved. I’ve been doing some of those over at the King’s Daughters’ Writing Camp. (Which y’all should check out! It’s awesome!!)

@savannah_grace2009

Lukas 

“Woah,” he breathed, watching Liv’s complete control over the water. “Cool.” He half-smiled.

I’m kinda stuck now, lol. We can keep their conversation going or end it here if you want. Or maybe we can have them meet up with some other peeps.

@savannah_grace2009

Just wanted to pop in and say I love how this is going! Cassian is a much better character imo now that I’ve seen him with Sef.

I know it’s super hard not to doubt yourself and your writing…. I think it’s just a writer thing. And it’s hard when it seems so easy for other people. But it doesn’t have to be perfect right now.…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Lukas 

“I miss my pani…” Liv said. Her hands slowly filled with water. Lukas blinked a few times, opening and closing his mouth.

“Wai— wha? How did you do that?” He pointed to her hands, his eyes wide.

@savannah_grace2009

Aww, I loved this scene!! 🥰

Don’t think I’ve posted this before, but have been wanting to.It’s the beginning scenes for Black Wolf, Green Eyes, Chase’s second novel idea. If you don’t know, Chase is a young man by now.

@freed_and_redeemed @savannah_grace2009 I have a Chase scene you may or may not have seen before

“You boys have five minutes to finish before we head out ag…

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@freed_and_redeemed @savannah_grace2009 @jonas @grcr @ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint @loopylin @whalekeeper @theshadow @highscribeofaetherium @idk

Hi. This is a scene from Guardians Angels. Criticism is requested and welcome.

Nahims sword sang as it sailed towards his opponent. The opponent blocked, swinging its second sword towards Nahim…

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@savannah_grace2009

I need to spend some time with my sister, we’re about to do a Bible study!

I feel sooo bad, but I have to go….I’m sorry!

Hey, don’t feel bad at all. Spending time with family is more important then this. I’m glad you stopped to do it.

If you want, you can try it without me to see if you’d want to do it together!

Na, I’ll ju…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Sure, I’ve been writing already! So, is it writing with no brake? Or can you pause? (just curious?)

@savannah_grace2009

So keep that version?

OK, here is the cover!!

@savannah_grace2009

Awesome!! I’ll tag a few more of you too.

@stephie @theshadow @keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium @whalekeeper @rae @linus-smallprint @grcr @loopylin @freed_and_redeemed

OK all, how is this for a story starter? I want to honestly know if it catches y’all attention.

 
Prologue
7/10/2065
 

Night had fallen over the capital…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

“No, not like me,” Cassian laughed. “Be like you, Birdie. The Great One made you something special. Don’t let anyone tell you otherwise.”

Much better.

I love the idea of using the seasons!

And I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Good! I’m glad you liked it! It was just a spur of the moment thing. lol.

Why are you so good at…

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@savannah_grace2009

I like this chapter a lot! (And the one you shared before it—I meant to reply to that one but I didn’t have a moment 😅)

Cassian is a good friend! 😍❤️❤️

Um… I know you were asking Ellette… but I don’t think your chapters are cringey.

@savannah_grace2009

Ooo, I really liked it! Super good! I like where this is going!

Yeah, Jonas is right again. I think you could honestly keep it in this chapter as long as you put something more important in the first section. Like the brother. Who is this other brother? This is the first we have heard of another sibling, and all we have…[Read more]