Sara

@grcr @mineralizedwritings @ellette-giselle @rae @savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @koshka @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper @smiley @anyone-else-idk-lol-XD

I made a couple new aesthetics for Leon and Riker🥰

(and I absolutely adore Pinterest and Canva now y’all😂😂 so helpful)

Andddddd y’all get to help me decide which character to make an aesthetic…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Thank you!

@keilah-h, @stephie, @loopylin, @theshadow

My goal for this week is to write and post Chapter the 7th.

@savannah_grace2009

Chase

Chase shrugged, the picture swirling away into a mixture of blue and green. “I-I used to cr-create pictures for her. I j-just al-always c-could. Sh-she l-liked this one a l-lot.” His eyes formed into a bright sunset. “A-all I do is take a mem…memory and concentrate. Wh-what would you l-like to see?”

@savannah_grace2009

I’m just trying to be super careful that I’m still honoring God with my writing. And I’m also paranoid about my writing XD

I’d say so far you’ve hit the nail on the head.

@savannah_grace2009

But question– do you think it’s too dark?

Nope, not at all. I think I did worse in Against All Odds. (The one I’ve been posting snippets of in the Chat Chat) It’s good. I say keep it for sure! I mean, they did it in Wingfeather and no one complained about those books being too dark. Annnnd they did it in Green Ember, taking all…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Oh man, this is gonna get rough. Not much to say yet. Sorry!!! I’m more of a plot critic then format critic. I’m still waiting to see how this all plays out.

Thanks for reading this because it keeps me from slacking off when people are expecting new chapters XD

SAME!!! And btw, did I tag you on Let There Be Light’s…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @loopylin @whalekeeper

exactly. If I am portraying it wrong, I need to change it. I just don’t want to change it yet because something has changed inside of Chase, and I need to figure out what it is first. That was what I was trying to say.

@savannah_grace2009

Thanks so much for tagging me!! Sorry I haven’t been keeping up, summer has been a little crazy XD. Thank you for the link to the chapters too, that’s so nice! I’ll try to catch up as soon as possible.

@savannah_grace2009

Lol you’re good XD

@savannah_grace2009

Interesting plot turn! Looks like Sef and her mom are gonna have a forbidden child…… Interesting. I don’t have much to say yet. I would like to see how some of this starts panning out. I’m definitely intrigued enough to keep reading!

@loopylin @whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009

I blame all of you for the lack of sleep last night XD. Seriously, what Loopy said had me thinking.

I understand your concerns, but as of now, I’m not going to change anything with Chase and just keep him going on the path I have laid so far. The reason is there’s something different in Chase. I haven’t…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Aw now my cheeks hurt from grinning like a cat 😊🤣

@whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009
XD I’m glad I’m actually making some sense

@whaley

I can understand why it’s tempting to write a character getting their way though.

Maybe it’s because we relate to our own characters so much? And we like getting what we want.

But that’s also how God judges people.
“Your will be done.”

But idk I haven’t t…[Read more]

@theshadow

Thanks for the support XD

@savannah_grace2009

Girlll for a second I was scared you were gonna talk about my story and I was scared XD

Look girl, you stay confident and keep writing, okay? 😊 Once upon a time, each of us probably had a dark phase, and may still be going through it. Maybe your story started that way, but now, you seem…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 Yayy :]

@freed_and_redeemed @savannah_grace2009 I have a Chase scene for you

@whalekeeper @loopylin @grcr @theducktator @esther-c @kielah-h @theshadow @ellette-giselle @anyone

I have a really sweet but sad Chase scene. For context, this is after Chase’s last battle with Narsa Jeptune.

oh, and beware, I’ve barely edited this. Criticism welcome 🙂

Chase…

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@savannah_grace2009 no, I don’t think you should delete it, per se, especially since it’s so important to the story, but it would be a good idea to clarify with a trigger warning in the beginning, like I said. Or have it happen long before the story starts or something.

I will admit something similar is in one of my WIPs, but I never make any…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @everyone else in this discussion

Sorry if I offended you. I didn’t mean it that way.

I don’t mind that the scene’s there, and I appreciate that it wasn’t graphic at all. I’ve seen worse. (do you know how GRAPHIC high school anatomy books–CHRISTIAN high school anatomy books–can be in the reproduction chapter??? UGH!) My…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Ok, that makes more sense. It just didn’t come across like that to me when I read it.

Maybe you could reword it, but yeah. I didn’t find the base concept cringe at all.

Yes, I would completely agree there.

@savannah_grace2009

Ooo, love it!! Ok, one there that’s a huge cringer for me is this. “You believe in me when I can’t believe in myself” I really, really don’t like the believing in yourself thing. You should not believe in yourself because you are nothing to believe in. On our own, we are nothing. Our works are nothing. It is ONLY through C…[Read more]