SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨

@savannah_grace2009

I’m going to try to read that once I finish the Eragon books by Christopher Paolini.

Okay, hope you like it! (If you find yourself getting bored I encourage you to hang in there! The second book, Words of Radiance, is my favorite, so if you get through TWoK you’ll get a big payoff!)

@savannah_grace2009

Like, over 1000 pages each 😅

@savannah_grace2009

lol. I do highly recommend them, but they are each super long, so you have to devote a lot of time to them.

@savannah_grace2009

You should!

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Thanks, girl, I’m just glad God gave her the strength to do it

Yes he does

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NAHIM

‘This is wrong. I shouldn’t be here.’ Nahim saw no sign of hostility, but he didn’t want to turn his back to a crowd of people (mostly men too) when there was no one to protect his back while he cut down the door. He tensed as a door opened. Slightly re…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

So I just read up to chapter 10, and it definitely has removed the issue of plot jumps. It still is jumping from so many POVs that it’s hard to connect with the characters on a deeper level yet, but once you start cycling back to Lilitu and Sef and whoever else, I think it should be fine.

I like Marcurious’s character as…[Read more]

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Hedieh

Hedieh did a quick twirl in front of the mirror, watching the skirt of her dress spin around her. She bounced on her toes, happy to be wearing the sparkling, baby pink ball gown. It was her favorite color.

She did one last check of her hair and makeup, then…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Yay, we have another Sara(h)!

But you spell your name wrong, lol. The correct way to spell it is actually Sara. haha!

No, the correct way is Sarah! 🙂 All kidding aside, nice to meet a fellow name-sharer.

What is your favorite color?

Almost all shades of purple and blue.

What is your favorite animal?

Cats! I adore them.

What i…

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@savannah_grace2009

Cool! Thanks!

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I know I miss them, it was such a fun and colorful family

I don’t know where Kelly went, she kind of just disappeared, what’s really annoying is that her last episodes were about her becoming a Christian, but we never find out if she stays with the Washingtons or not

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And then something came over her.

In one deft motion, she let go of his hand and shoulder and wrapped her arms around his waist, pressing the side of her face against his vest in an embrace. She took a few shuddering breaths, trying to keep control of herself. She was not going to cry.

Once Hugo recovered from his shock, she…

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@savannah_grace2009

Well, I haven’t totally developed his character yet

Like I said, that’s fine. I just think these are good things to be thinking about.

he gets a lot of his confidence from relying on himself and that he can basically do anything he wants in Erstonia, so he’s kind of entitled.

I do find it a bit unlikely that his confi…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I just read chapter 10. I think Marcurious is a really cool character. There’s two main things I wonder: where does he get all his confidence? And what is he afraid of? You don’t have to answer these right now, but I think they’re definitely things worth exploring in the story, especially the second. So far  whenever we see h…[Read more]

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I’m definitely Mandy, I relate to her personal struggles and she can also be a goody to shoes but she’s also clever and can be snarky, she can be insecure which I relate to a lot

I can also lean toward Zoe too

I loved the mulligans!!! and we never got to see any episodes of Tony and Brianna (they were the two…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Yeah and it would be easy to bring back guy characters because they could just get new actors… Their voices would have changed anyway. The female roles would be a little harder, though.

But this would be a really fun RP idea… Everyone chooses an old character and we bring them all back as adults!

Rand the Barkleys- they…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Yeah honestly, I don’t think it’s such a bad thing to be a goody-two-shoes either. I used to be super picky with some things though, and even now I still have different standards for things than most youth, but I don’t judge other people for making different choices anymore like I used to.

It’s been a little while since I…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Ok, awesome! I’ll take a look then!

@savannah_grace2009

You definitely fixed a lot. Though I still think you got to connect the chapters a bit more, like how did Lilitu and Sef end up in the woods and why are they being hunted, as well as their relationship. You’ve might have already done this though, and simply not posted it on KP, have you done it on reedsy already, I’ll have to check.

@savannah_grace2009

Alright, sounds good. 😅 It was a pretty big gap… 😶