SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨

@savannah_grace2009

Well, the Traitor normally specializes in the UNIT and has virtually nothing to do with the prison block, so he’s like the lead scientist. Good idea about the scars, I might use that, because since he doesn’t go to the prison block, like you said, how would she know? And yeah, I was kind of going for that he goes around to mak…

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@savannah_grace2009 @grcr

Hi!! I’m so sorry I haven’t been on in forever (Maybe its only been like 3 days, but still a long time 🙂 ) So… I have been crazy, crazy busy. Like, I even went to my first barn dance in my new town and there were almost 100 high schoolers🤯 Personally I love to hang out with people so I went without knowing anyone :D…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Hmm…. yeah, let’s just wait… maybe we should tag them…

@savannah_grace2009

I see! 😄 Alright!

@savannah_grace2009

Cool! Sounds good! Continuing the story in the different world would be awesome.

(I’m pretty much fine with whatever.)

(However, I don’t know if I’d want to continue using Lane… I might change my character out, unless ya’ll don’t mind me adding a second character…)

@euodia-vision @freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @savannah_grace2009 @rae @spinner4him @smiley @grcr @hybridlore @whalekeeper @anyone-else-that-might-be-interesed

Ok… I’m so excited because I’m finally sharing my WIP idea for NaNo!!!

I think it’s the only WIP that I’ve actually put a lot of thought into before actually…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

The new RP idea:

There once was a great king who had a deep thirst for knowledge. It was such a deep thirst that it is said he never felt like he had ever gathered enough and spent his time mostly in the library of the Palace. It was because of this that the king, spurred by the words of his greatest advisor, sent out an edict…

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@savannah_grace2009

Oh yeah, that’s a really good idea! I’ll have to keep that in mind. 🙂

@savannah_grace2009

🙂 Thanks!

@savannah_grace2009

Thanks, I’ll be brainstorming. Do you mind if it’s medieval themed? Cuz I’ve got a bright idea for that one.

@savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @mineralizedwritings @rae @acancello

Kari

A bang from the basement drew Kari’s attention to the basement door. What could that noise be? A gunshot? Her stomach twisted into a knot, and as she looked around the room, she realized Ottoline was missing, and come to think of it, so was that new girl. Alarm bells rang in…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

So I read your epilogue and a few things stuck out to me…

(ordered by relevance)

1. I love it.

2. In the first part I almost think you use the Name ‘Great One’ a little to much.

3. While Rishona may grow angry, I doubt in such a perfect world she would try to slap someone with no respect. If Elysium is perfect, and the…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Yes, that definitely makes it clearer. With the cover, it might be better to have the puzzle pieces cover all or at least most of it. Obviously you have a limited amount of pictures to show, but it would probably look better to have more.

@savannah_grace2009

lol. Alright, so I’m still collecting my thoughts a bit, but here’s what I took down so far:

When a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity to become a warrior comes to the southern Burnish orphanages, five of the one hundred competent orphans chose to become warriors. Among those was the quiet and loyal Shrapti Yelper, son of the…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Hey, I just saw this and as a mapmaker decided to place a bit of input.

If you want to do digital maps, there is a thing called Inkarnate. It’s where you can build your maps online. The downside is that to access all their tools, you need to buy their premium option, but they also have a free option.

I am a self-trained…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Also, I have some more thought about what I was talking about earlier.

So, with Marcurious’ concern that Ottoline will want revenge, maybe you could put that in later, the next time they see each other. It seems odd that Marcurious, while he is suffering from the effects of poison and surrounded by his captors, is worried t…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Just out of curiosity, is UNIT an acronym?

@savannah_grace2009 @jonas

Yeah, I didn’t think about it much. I assumed that Ottoline was there simply to scare Marcurious, and to scare her by witnessing his pain. It is a bit of a weird moment though because he assumes that Ottoline was there to torture him, but then we see him just being tortured from her perspective. It’s not that this scene…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

GIRL…

YOUR WRITING STYLE IS AMAZING I LOVE IT SOOO MUCH!!!!!!! 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

@mineralizedwritings

AAAHHHHH I LOVEEE TAUREN AND LESLI SOO FREAKING MUCHHHHH 😍😍😍😍😍😍

@everyone-else-cuz-im-too-tired-to-comment-on-everything-sorry-yall-lol

I love everyone’s writing SOOOOO MUCH!!! Y’all keep going, you’re doing great…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Explain what a RP is to me and I’ll do it. I really need to jog my brain!