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hybridlore replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
@esther-c @keilah-h @theducktator @koshka @grcr @ellette-giselle @elishavet-pidyon @savannah_grace2009 @whalekeeper @theshadow @stephie @anyone-else
Just a reminder that the group call will be tomorrow morning, Lord willing!
10:30 EST / 9:30 CST / 8:30 MST
(I think I got that right? I’m not really sure about the abbreviations. XD)
Please let m…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@savannah_grace2009 whoa, the fact that Lilitu just killed the man responsible for his current situation is crazy!! Even if he doesn’t know that.
It’s also a good message–revenge isn’t the best option. Killing Kratos just made Lilitu feel worse.
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The Ducktator replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Ooh congratulations! I’m trying to get a job. I’ve applied at a Kroger, and I’m going to apply for an ice cream place later today or tomorrow. But yeah, I don’t have much free time as is, and that’s going to take what I do have. 🙁
Lilitu, what have you done????
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The Ducktator replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
You’re alive! I was starting to wonder where you’d gone. *goes to find chapters*
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Esther posted an update 1 year ago
@savannah_grace2009
Hey girl! Just been thinking about you lately. How are you doing?? 🩷 -
Esther started the topic Middle-grade fiction ideas needed!!! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year ago
Hey guys!!
So as I step away from one project for a while to let it simmer before I tackle the third draft, I need another longer length project to work on. I thought about starting on an idea that’s been rolling around in my head for a couple months, but I’ll need to do a lot of research and don’t feel like doing that yet, lol.
So! I’ve been wa…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
@theshadow @grcr @whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @keilah-h (Is this something you would be interested in? I can’t remember if you responded.) @stephie @trailblazer @esther-c @highscribeofaetherium @i’m-sure-i-forgot-someone-so-consider-yourself-tagged-sorry!
I’m thinking about plann…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
THIS is why I’m not dating until college. 😂 I think I’d be allowed before then…but the sibling awkwardness is too much.
For real thoughhh 😂 I know in some family’s it’s not awkward, but I decided to go for it with Hallie’s family. XD
*squealing* I can forgive him for not taking her. He has a good reason.
🤭
*tries that* Can you rea…
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic Rainbows, unicorns, and random questions in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 1 month ago
@loopylin @power @theducktator @savannah_grace2009 @ellette-giselle @trailblazer @elishavet-pidyon @the_lost-journal @keilah-h @theshadow
Now is time for our next random question, served with a side of rainbow cupcakes! (Ugh, I can’t say anything rainbow-y without sounding weird. Oh well.)
So I had Chatgpt come up with the most random question…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@esther-c @keilah-h @ellette-giselle @rae @hybridlore @theducktator @savannah_grace2009 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 @anyone-else-lol
and an extra aesthetic 👀
aka the villain’s aesthetic

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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@esther-c @keilah-h @ellette-giselle @rae @hybridlore @theducktator @savannah_grace2009 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 @anyone-else-lol
MC Aesthetics for my fantasy WIP 🤭
MC #1:

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Beth posted an update 1 year, 1 month ago
@savannah_grace2009
I keep getting waayyy too anxious about KP shutting down and… okay… last night I had a dream about it and you were the first person I thought of to contact to stay in touch in case KP ended 😭 -
whaley replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
no I haven’t!!!
Oki, I’m going to explain this structure because it seems to work for a looot of stories! 🙃 It’s very broad/all-encompassing, except for some Eastern cultures and the like.
I did not invent all of this. I listened to Brandon Sanderson’s writing lectures and explained them in my own words. So just to clarify, I…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
@savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @grcr @smiley @keilah-h @theshadow @trailblazer
A lot of this is actually first draft material since I was adding in stuff, so bear with me 🫣 But I didn’t want to keep y’all waiting. 😉
Chapter 10
“We’re not picking them up, right?” Easton watched Hallie through the rear view mirror.
“No, they’ll mee…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Yes, of course girl!! <333
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Thanks!! <33
one thing I’ll suggest, is that I feel like you don’t really introduce the family to us in the first few chapters. At first I wasn’t even sure if Blake was their sibling or not XDXD
They do have a HUGE family, so setting a solid foundation and making all the siblings and the parents unique and established in ou…
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
I could see people getting confused and overwhelmed since there’s so many of them hahaha
This reminded me of a time a visitor to our church told my dad that the number of kids he had intimidated her. She was completely serious and never came back. There were only four of us at the time too. XD
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
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Esther replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Ohhh, haha, gotcha 🤪
yeah I actually had no idea this was where Wyoh originated!!
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RAE replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Alpha killed one of @ellette-giselle ‘s Agents.
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@esther-c
HI ESTHER!!!
How are you doing?
Sorry I haven’t been active lately, I’ve ben soooo busy!
I’ve been working on my WIP when I can and I have a few new chapters!
I know I don’t comment on your Worth All the World page but I do read it when you tag me so please keep tagging me! I love your writing, I love all the highschool drama lol XD…[Read more]
Hiiii! <33
I’m doing pretty good! A little busy because I’ve been prioritizing things like school, family, and rest(!) lately, but it’s been good. 🙂
Good!! Yes! I saw those, and I’mma read them as soon as I get the chance.
No worries! I’m so glad you’ve been enjoying it; it means a lot. 😊
Oh so fun!! I’m about to get a job at a coffee shop t…[Read more]