@savannah_grace2009
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Keilah H. replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 11 hours ago
@savannah_grace2009 whoa, the fact that Lilitu just killed the man responsible for his current situation is crazy!! Even if he doesn’t know that.
It’s also a good message–revenge isn’t the best option. Killing Kratos just made Lilitu feel worse.
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The Ducktator replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 14 hours ago
Ooh congratulations! I’m trying to get a job. I’ve applied at a Kroger, and I’m going to apply for an ice cream place later today or tomorrow. But yeah, I don’t have much free time as is, and that’s going to take what I do have. 🙁
Lilitu, what have you done????
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The Ducktator replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 14 hours ago
You’re alive! I was starting to wonder where you’d gone. *goes to find chapters*
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Esther posted an update 1 day, 15 hours ago
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Hey girl! Just been thinking about you lately. How are you doing?? 🩷 -
Esther started the topic Middle-grade fiction ideas needed!!! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 days, 9 hours ago
Hey guys!!
So as I step away from one project for a while to let it simmer before I tackle the third draft, I need another longer length project to work on. I thought about starting on an idea that’s been rolling around in my head for a couple months, but I’ll need to do a lot of research and don’t feel like doing that yet, lol.
So! I’ve been wa…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 11 hours ago
@theshadow @grcr @whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @keilah-h (Is this something you would be interested in? I can’t remember if you responded.) @stephie @trailblazer @esther-c @highscribeofaetherium @i’m-sure-i-forgot-someone-so-consider-yourself-tagged-sorry!
I’m thinking about plann…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 11 hours ago
THIS is why I’m not dating until college. 😂 I think I’d be allowed before then…but the sibling awkwardness is too much.
For real thoughhh 😂 I know in some family’s it’s not awkward, but I decided to go for it with Hallie’s family. XD
*squealing* I can forgive him for not taking her. He has a good reason.
🤭
*tries that* Can you rea…
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic Rainbows, unicorns, and random questions in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@loopylin @power @theducktator @savannah_grace2009 @ellette-giselle @trailblazer @elishavet-pidyon @the_lost-journal @keilah-h @theshadow
Now is time for our next random question, served with a side of rainbow cupcakes! (Ugh, I can’t say anything rainbow-y without sounding weird. Oh well.)
So I had Chatgpt come up with the most random question…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@esther-c @keilah-h @ellette-giselle @rae @hybridlore @theducktator @savannah_grace2009 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 @anyone-else-lol
and an extra aesthetic 👀
aka the villain’s aesthetic
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@esther-c @keilah-h @ellette-giselle @rae @hybridlore @theducktator @savannah_grace2009 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 @anyone-else-lol
MC Aesthetics for my fantasy WIP 🤭
MC #1:
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Beth posted an update 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@savannah_grace2009
I keep getting waayyy too anxious about KP shutting down and… okay… last night I had a dream about it and you were the first person I thought of to contact to stay in touch in case KP ended 😭 -
whaley replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 3 days ago
no I haven’t!!!
Oki, I’m going to explain this structure because it seems to work for a looot of stories! 🙃 It’s very broad/all-encompassing, except for some Eastern cultures and the like.
I did not invent all of this. I listened to Brandon Sanderson’s writing lectures and explained them in my own words. So just to clarify, I…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 6 days ago
@savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @grcr @smiley @keilah-h @theshadow @trailblazer
A lot of this is actually first draft material since I was adding in stuff, so bear with me 🫣 But I didn’t want to keep y’all waiting. 😉
Chapter 10
“We’re not picking them up, right?” Easton watched Hallie through the rear view mirror.
“No, they’ll mee…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks ago
Yes, of course girl!! <333
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks ago
Thanks!! <33
one thing I’ll suggest, is that I feel like you don’t really introduce the family to us in the first few chapters. At first I wasn’t even sure if Blake was their sibling or not XDXD
They do have a HUGE family, so setting a solid foundation and making all the siblings and the parents unique and established in ou…
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Potato reporter replied to the topic Potato news 64 in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks ago
Despite what everyone has said, Parsley couldn’t go against Paisley. She text her vote for Pax… and now all whom was left was Patrick… and if anyone wanted to change their vote.
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Potato reporter replied to the topic Potato news 64 in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks ago
@theducktator, @raxforge, @loopylin, @savannah_grace2009 @rae @beth-torres
Oh you do ducktator… sorry
“It is just amusing to see.” – Pax
“Shut up! No one wants to hear it!” – Petunia vexed
“Well… since you won’t be quiet about it… I’ll hear both your sides…” – Polly
“Fine, I will go first. My first point to make is that I left with…[Read more]
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Potato reporter replied to the topic Potato news 64 in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
@theducktator, @raxforge, @loopylin, @savannah_grace2009 @rae @beth-torres
One more thing, the votes are due march 20th, TYSM
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Potato reporter replied to the topic Potato news 64 in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
“WAHHH?! BUT I AM NOT THE KILLER! AND I NEVER LIED!” – Phillip
“If that IS so, then how come after you left, THE DOOR NEVER OPENED AGAIN!” – Pax pointed at Phillip
“Bu- but I swear it wasn’t me!” – Phillip began to sweat, he wiped his brow
“But… if it is Phillip, what was his motive? And who did he work with…?” – Petunia
“I-… it isn’t…[Read more]
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 2 days ago
I could see people getting confused and overwhelmed since there’s so many of them hahaha
This reminded me of a time a visitor to our church told my dad that the number of kids he had intimidated her. She was completely serious and never came back. There were only four of us at the time too. XD
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@esther-c
HI ESTHER!!!
How are you doing?
Sorry I haven’t been active lately, I’ve ben soooo busy!
I’ve been working on my WIP when I can and I have a few new chapters!
I know I don’t comment on your Worth All the World page but I do read it when you tag me so please keep tagging me! I love your writing, I love all the highschool drama lol XD…[Read more]
Hiiii! <33
I’m doing pretty good! A little busy because I’ve been prioritizing things like school, family, and rest(!) lately, but it’s been good. 🙂
Good!! Yes! I saw those, and I’mma read them as soon as I get the chance.
No worries! I’m so glad you’ve been enjoying it; it means a lot. 😊
Oh so fun!! I’m about to get a job at a coffee shop t…[Read more]