@savannah_grace2009
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 18 hours ago
Yeah. Plus, Martha would be more comfortable if she wasn’t alone with a bunch of guys. It would be better if Eric was awake, but since he’s not, she’s glad Sara is there.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 18 hours ago
Rory
Rory stared at him. “Is it kind of like tactics? You know, attack plans. The officers organize all the troops so that they can effortlessly wipe out the target.” He paused and chewed on his lower lip. “Maybe not…”
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 18 hours ago
You could read his story if you wanted. You never replied after the last chapter I sent.
But you might not like it.Rory
Rory blinked at the shattered pieces. “Jigsaw puzzle?”
He clenched and unclenched his gloved hands. He was still getting over the water incident. Leo acted like it was all normal, but Rory had never seen anything…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 19 hours ago
Ah yes! I would love to see his tactics! Rory is going to pick up so many bad, (possibly useful) habits.
Yeah… well he’s still been through worse. Maybe not physically at this point in his life, but he’s in a far better situation than he was, busted up or not. And as for later…….. this is gentle compared. -
Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 1 day, 19 hours ago
Then write it!!!!!
WRITE! WRITE! WRITE!
And I won’t stop chanting until you send me a section.
Must read!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 19 hours ago
No! Really? I RPed weeks ago. Does that mean….. KP ATE MY POST!!!! *sobbing brokenly*
sure, whatever works for you!
Well, someone had better stop Mateo, and I really don’t want Leo to die.
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Ruth replied to the topic Group Art Challenges! in the forum Art 1 day, 19 hours ago
If I can, I will post my drawings today. I just have the 1 hour one left to do
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 1 day, 19 hours ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 1 day, 19 hours ago
@koshka
Yes, there were two that really fit him. Actually three. Both Andrew Peterson songs, and the first vocal song. (I think it was an alevation worship one.) -
Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 20 hours ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 1 day, 20 hours ago
That was fun! I really got a feel for him!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 1 day, 23 hours ago
FUN!!!! I’ll take a listen!
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whaley replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 12 hours ago
I’m assuming you added Sara because writing one female in the group is awkward?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 days, 15 hours ago
@linus-smallprint thank you! I don’t draw mecha dragons much, but when I do I like to put detail into them.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 days, 15 hours ago
That’s a fine mecha dragon!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 15 hours ago
@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
Chapter 12 out now!
I was talking to my sister last night about the story, and we decided on a couple of things that would make us both more comfortable reading and writing in the story, which would also make things less awkward for the characters. However, I still will not rewrite…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 days, 15 hours ago
-be me
-be listening to the Portal 2 soundtrack cause I get into a phase of wanting to do that every so often (still haven’t played the game itself though, despite the fact that like 3 people have recommended it to me, cause I’m not sure if my computer will like me if I download another game)
-have a drawing idea
-D R A G O N W H E A T L E…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 16 hours ago
@savannah_grace2009 whoa, the fact that Lilitu just killed the man responsible for his current situation is crazy!! Even if he doesn’t know that.
It’s also a good message–revenge isn’t the best option. Killing Kratos just made Lilitu feel worse.
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Help on writing an impactful last day in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 17 hours ago
First off, funny forum signature.
*bows* Thank you.
Second, what are the ages of your characters?
The character who knows she’s about to die is about 18, as is her best friend. Her grandfather is 70ish. Her grandfather and best friend are the only ones who know.
It also depends on if they’re Christians or not.
They are not at the moment. I s…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Middle-grade fiction ideas needed!!! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 days, 18 hours ago
Yeah for real. My group of middle school girls ironically happens to be mostly homeschooled, but one of the other leaders has a group that is mostly public schoolers, and you can clearly see the difference. Quite often, I’ll come away from our small group time encouraged by the fact that my girls were sharing testimonies of things…[Read more]
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