SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨

@ellette-giselle

If you’re worried about that, you’ll be 100% fine.

@highscribeofaetheriuM

no prob.

@ellette-giselle @theducktator @linus-smallprint

Sorry guys, I’ve suddenly gotten really busy (got two essays I’ve got to write! Augh!) so it might be a bit before I can write down all my thoughts about Yumi.

And @ducktator I first read Mistborn when I was 14 (my dad listened to it and okay-ed it first) and I was fine with everything. I’d say it…[Read more]

@rae

I will be more annoyed if you save people who need to die for character arc or story purposes.

@ellette-giselle

and Baron goes for it. 🤣🤣 that was the bluntest declaration of love I’ve seen in a while. 😆

Good section. One of your best, honestly. I’m starting to really feel your characters!

lol, yes

I’m glad you enjoyed it!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Don’t get too attached or you may hate me for ete…

@theshadow

Linus is 💯 correct. Plus, the more you pause the more you lose your flow. For me, I turn off autocorrect and grammarly, and I just write and write and don’t look back until the whole thing is on paper. Beginning to end. Then you can go back and start editing and fine-lining and rewriting. Give yourself a foundation to build off of, o…[Read more]

@rae

and Baron goes for it. 🤣🤣 that was the bluntest declaration of love I’ve seen in a while. 😆

 

Good section. One of your best, honestly. I’m starting to really feel your characters!

Alrighty, I read over the next two chapters and decided to post them both today, but after this, you can expect to get only one a week… unfortunately, I only have six more chapters after this. 🙁 I guess that means I need to write more haha.

Without further ado, here’s the link! (It’s the same one as last time &#x1f…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Awesome! Thank you so much! That was something I really tried to pay attention to, because I come from a Christian family and I’ve never known a time where my parents didn’t know God… so it’s something I have to think about, how someone who’s never been exposed to this kind of thing would react to it. If you or anyone else has…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Okay, I am caught up now.

I see you already saw some of my comments. I like where this is going and I think Sara’s reaction to the underground church makes sense. You have good attention to detail as you write.

Out of curiosity, what draft number is this? I doubt it is the first.

Looking forward to the next chapters!

@whalekeeper

👍

@theducktator

Thank you for your support! I’m still working on trying to piece everything together, but I do think I want to include that scene in some way.

@theducktator

Your welcome!

I might wait until you are 18 for Mistborn. But yeah, check with your friends as well.

@ellette-giselle

yeah…. If I wanna risk seeing porn worthy covers when I open it.

Ewww… Yup, that’s a very good reason to avoid that.

(until those were taken down for being politically offensive)

Taken down for being politically offensive? Or was there perhaps another reason. One the Librarians don’t want you to know. Hmm…

@theshadow

Ah. I thought it might be the first draft.

Can I give you some advice?

From what I can tell about the way you write, you seem to have trouble getting through your progects. My advice to you is common for first drafts. Don’t worry about rewriting anything. Just power through, and keep writing without looking back. There is going to be…[Read more]

@loopylin

Alpha

Alpha chuckled. “Honestly, not much else. I’ve been bored out of my mind, hence playing with the knife.” Alpha’s hand glowed and he made the knife travel around the room before hovering over his shoulder again. “From getting stabbed in the lung to not having anything to do, life is crazy,” Alpha commented with a sigh, making his…[Read more]

Likewise I am not very familiar with how this works but it sounds like a fun idea!

@raxforge @koshka

The Twins

Ellie paused in the doorway of the classroom, and looked around, deciding where to sit.

The boy behind Eddie almost bumped into her when she stopped as well.

“Oh! pardon my blundering.”

Ed shrugged. “You’re fine.”

Ellie located some seats near the back and Eddie followed. Once they’d both sat, Ed smiled at the…[Read more]

@rae

Dante

“What have you been up to?”

Dante tied the handkerchief around his arm while considering his answer. He eyed the hovering knife a bit nervously.

“Just getting ready for my trip. Pawned off a few things for cash. Not really sure what to do with the rest of the day.”

He plopped down onto the foot of his bed and rested his elbows…[Read more]

@theducktator

Thou art officially dubbed the KP Archivist.

I am honored 😌

 

And don’t worry about replying! It’s only been like two days. You don’t have to role play anything if you don’t feel like it. Having a foggy sick brain sucks. Hope you get some rest and start feeling better soon! <3

@hybridlore

Thanks!!! ☺️

@smiley @keilah-h @theshadow

Thank you ladies! Sure thing!!

@theducktator

Wait really?? Oh I didn’t even notice! Maybe I’ll have to read the book now 😝