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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
Dante
The hospital was close. Rory helped Dante walk to the bus stop, and then rode with him to the emergency room. Rory seemed tense and wary on the bus, but then, so was Dante. They picked a seat near the door, and kept an eye on the other passengers.
When they arrived, a nurse told them that a doctor was available to treat…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
@loopylin
Yep, those are the rules I remember -
whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
Lucille
Lucy had to choke down a snort. She took the piano lid and pulled. It was heavy but had no hinges. It fell off with a thunderous boom. She scampered back, lost her balance, and sat down suddenly. Dust rose and she let out two sharp sneezes.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 5 months ago
@rae @loopylin @mineralizedwritings @grcr
Oh cool! I love all of these!!!
MIN!! you have a Tauren too!!!??
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Keilah H. replied to the topic I DID IT GUYS, I WROTE AN ORIGINAL STORY in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 months ago
@rae thank you! My dad said the same so it looks like this is a keeper!
My prose is weird lol. I kept it in my style (sorta like my fanfic) but I also wanted to inject a bit of the style from books I like.
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RAE's profile was updated 5 months ago
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
So I’m thinking of the rules my school played with as a kid:
1. If someone catches a ball mid-air without fumbling it, the ref sends in one of their teammates who got out.
2. You can dodge or block a ball coming at you with another ball that you’re holding.
3. You start out with all the balls in the middle of the court, and everyone has to rush…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon @whalekeeper @theducktator
Felicity
Shoes squeaked on the gym floor as Marcel’s team spread out. Felicity found a place somewhere in the middle of the gym. She did some arm stretches while eyeing the other team. There were a few people she recognized: Viktor, Lois, and one of the twins. She finished her stretches, and began b…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic I DID IT GUYS, I WROTE AN ORIGINAL STORY in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 months ago
I read it, and I have to say, it immediately captivated me.
Not only does the Prologue promise us a swash-buckling tale of heroics and battles, but I find the prose rather enjoyable. It definitely has that storyteller feel like Uncle Garth in Secondhand Lions (if anyone gets that movie reference). Maybe not exact, but it reminded me of…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
Thanks <3
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
@theducktator Ugh headaches are the worst. Stop looking at screens and drink some water. Hope you feel better soon <3
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
I probably won’t write anything tonight. I have a bad headache. 🙁
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
The Protector — Gabriel Mai
When Lucy tried to play the piano, Gabriel relaxed, realizing it was merely an instrument. He pressed a few keys exploratorily, sneezing as the dust traveled under his mask and into his nose. “Is it a magic instrument? Most the ones in my world are ones you have to blow wind through to work, or have s…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
BAhaha XD
I think it’s safe to say this is a weird place and there can be weird random objects scattered within. Maybe that says something about the labyrinth masters, not so much the piano itself.
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
@whalekeeper
I love how Lucy is wondering why there’s a piano in the room, while I’m over here like “It couldn’t be empty, and just a couch or chair is boring, so piano was the first thing I thought of”. Zero deep meaning just a brain who was trying to rp while listening to a streamer talk about a mech video game. -
whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
Lucille
“You’ve…” Lucy trailed off, brow furrowing. She clacked her fingers over the keys and tried to play a folk song, but only knew a few seconds of it.
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
The Protector — Gabriel Mai
“A piano? This is a piano?”
Gabriel touched it gently, dust flying into the air. He jumped back defensively as an off-tune note rang in the air from the key he pressed.
“Is that normal?” He watched the piano like a curious kitten, not sure if they should attack, ignore, or play with it.
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
Lucille
“Dunno why they’d put a piano in here. I wonder who they are.” Lucy couldn’t tell if they had returned to ground level – after taking the door that led into earth – or if they were in the labyrinth’s basement. The floor had sloped slightly as they walked, sometimes up and sometimes down. Even here, her internal compass was…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
That was lovely. Your descriptions are so pretty, and it’s such a tight piece of short fiction. Hopefully you don’t regret posting it anymore because we appreciated reading it.
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
The Protector — Gabriel Mai
Gabriel nodded. “Good.” He stood, the voices that still had been whispering in his head that day were quiet as he had bound up her arms, but now they returned, a constant noise slowly driving him insane.
Gabriel waved one of his glowing blades ahead. The walls were rough like brick, the floor with l…[Read more]
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