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Sara replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months ago
And then a bad guy POV….
SPOILER ALERT–Iver’s actually not real-real. He’s actually a Pythonos in disguise. Pythonos that use Dark Magick to take the form of other people are called Weavers. Anyways…
The Weaver awoke from his drunken state and beheld his disheveled apartment.
He closed his eyes and listened for the thrum of the girl’s h…
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Sara replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @hybridlore @acancello @esther-c @scoutfinch180
Okay…part TWO of the sad scene…
Lilitu walked briskly down the dimly lit streets, Sef’s emaciated form in his arms.
Though his foot pained him, he could barely feel it now.
His body thrummed with adrenaline.
She was so weightless….his stomach turned. He could feel every bon…
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Sara replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 1 week ago
Okay!!
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Sara replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 1 week ago
Livia
She smiled as if to reassure him, unsure of what to say.
And then she felt a familiar warmth on the back of her neck.
“Xandro!” she turned around, letting go of Lukas’s hand and hugging Xandro’s neck. He snorted.
“I know, I know, I may have forgotten about you…” she hung her head guiltily. Xandro grabbed Lukas by the…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 1 week ago
I know…he makes me SO MAD!!!
You can give her hot cocoa and blankets…she needs it…😭😭😭
Don’t worry…Lilitu’s rescuing her <333
OH MY GOODNESS YOU PUT LEFSE IN YOUR SIGNATURE!!!! That means so much to me!
Thanks for reading it <33
I wrote it in English at school (we weren’t doing anything and had free time) and was…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 1 week ago
@freedomwriter76 (you might have to call the protection squad on this one….) @hybridlore @acancello @esther-c @scoutfinch180
Here’s a chapter I just wrote…I’m pretty happy with it but it’s SO SAD!!!
“Sef!”
She heard the door crash open upstairs, and her heart plummeted to the soles of her feet.
It was late.
Very late.
The odds that Ive…
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Sara replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 1 week ago
I think I’ll keep Ottoline. Since Marcurious wasn’t here originally I don’t think I’ll keep him.
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Sara replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 1 week ago
That’s so cute! I love Ev <3
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Sara replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 1 week ago
It was so sweet! <333
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Sara replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 1 week ago
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Sara replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 1 week ago
You’re good XD
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Sara replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 1 week ago
oh, don’t worry, I’ll tag you once I begin spamming Jonas with dragon pics!
Oh that’s a relief.
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Sara replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 1 week ago
Oh yeah.. I’m with Janessa XD
If anything hilarious happens, make sure to tag me, lol
I’ll stick to the party one.
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Sara replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 1 week ago
Maybe the House just put them in a simulation to intimidate them or something?
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Sara replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 1 week ago
OH NO WE FORGOT ABOUT XANDRO!!!!!
If you want…you can RP Xandro finding them, or I can too.
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Sara replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 1 week ago
Livia
Lukas held her hand in his, and Liv fought back a smile. This was where she wanted to be….with Lukas.
She could tell he was nervous–his stutter had returned and he was blushing.
“You don’t have to be nervous,” she reassured him, squeezing his hand, “I’m nervous too.”
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Sara replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 1 week ago
Okay, so we can just pretend all the adventure-y stuff never happened and go back to the dance I guess?? If you guys don’t have any objections…then we can just continue with that.
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Sara replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 1 week ago
Aww they’re so cute!!
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Sara replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 1 week ago
Okay…so I’ve been worried about my story becoming too graphic…and I was wondering what you thought of it.
The parts I’m concerned about aren’t until the second part…which is a while away from the first chapter…so if you wanted to jump to those ones (or just give me your thoughts on the other ones) that would be…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic The Ildin Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 1 week ago
Oof…yeah, I feel that. Plotting can be really hard! I’ve definitely struggled with that A LOT in the past.
The sad truth is…there’s really no “perfect formula” to make a gripping plot.
What I have done, is followed the advice of Abbie Emmons (on YouTube) and gave my story a theme, the truth I want to show in my story. In my story,…[Read more]
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