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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted a new activity comment 2 years, 5 months ago
I spend WAYYY too much time on here too…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted a new activity comment 2 years, 5 months ago
I really don’t know XD I guess I need to do some more worldbuilding! I see her as wearing a tan tee-shirt and some kind of leggings, but idk. Sorry! You can just draw her like that for now, I guess?
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted a new activity comment 2 years, 5 months ago
Hey, it snowed here too! But not enough to go sledding lol
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@highscribeofaetherium
“You’re probably here to steal my passcodes and break into all my online accounts.” HOW DID YOU KNOW???? lol-
Magic, obviously.
Are you sure you’re not after my pastry? *eyes suspiciously*-
No. I have my own. lol
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*continues to eye suspiciously*
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@highscribeofaetherium I JUST WANT TO BREAK INTO YOUR ACCOUNTS. I PROMISE YOUR PASTRY IS SAFE. speaking of which…i must go steal some pie from our fridge…adios!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted a new activity comment 2 years, 5 months ago
Ottoline has blonde hair that can appear pink depending on the lighting, and light pink eyes. She has a dark red beanie, and various scars on her arms. Umm she wears neutral colors I guess, like tans, greens, etc. (she’s my pfp, but you probably already knew that XD)
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Okay. What types of clothing does she wear?
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I really don’t know XD I guess I need to do some more worldbuilding! I see her as wearing a tan tee-shirt and some kind of leggings, but idk. Sorry! You can just draw her like that for now, I guess?
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Okay.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Non-Linear worldbuilding collaboration challenge! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
…choose whether or not to sacrifice themselves as well, or…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Oh yeah, right.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Non-Linear worldbuilding collaboration challenge! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
It’s fine, your’s was better. “split personalities????” where do I get this stuff XD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
I know. I was only mostly joking.
I think @acancello needs to make Hugo talk to Ottoline, and @rae might need to do a transition scene? Idk.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Non-Linear worldbuilding collaboration challenge! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
…having split personalities…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
Same…I would write one…but I kind of have to know what I’m talking about to write one, lol
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
I’m bored. WE NEED MORE CHAOS!!!!!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
Sorry I couldn’t help more! Plotting is just really new to me….so it’s hard to give good advice XD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Non-Linear worldbuilding collaboration challenge! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
…that everyone must stay ten miles away from them, or else…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
The website says that the Hook is the inciting incident (so maybe I plotted wrong, XD). Apparently the First Plot Point is the point of no return, where your character takes action and there’s no going back. It’s the first significant event of the story.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
I will!!! I love them so much <3
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Non-Linear worldbuilding collaboration challenge! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
…their brains disintegrate with how easy it is and they become…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
Hmm. Good question. I’m not exactly sure how to explain it,
partly because I don’t understand it that well. But from what I understand, the Hook is what grabs the reader’s attention. Like in my story, for example, the “hook” would be when Neveah gives birth to Hanna. It disrupts Sef’s natural world, however, it doesn’t really force her to…[Read more] -
SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Non-Linear worldbuilding collaboration challenge! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
….in caves in the mountains, along the streets, anywhere that makes surviving as hard as possible…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
This is all I’ve written in the next chapter:
The next morning, Lilitu walked out of his room, wearing actual clothes this time.
He stopped dead in his tracks when he saw Sef sleeping on the couch. Then all the memories from last night came rushing back. Why was she here? What had happened? Where were his parents?
Sef’s green hair f…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
@jonas @highscribeofaetherium @thearcaneaxiom
Here’s my next chapter… if you have romance, LOOK AWAY lol!
Chapter 6: Raindrops
Lilitu was sitting on the steps, minding his own business, like any sensible person would do.
He was watching the wind sway the trees, listening to their whispers.
Often, he would sit and try to make sense of what…[Read more]
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Okay.