@sarah-h
Active 8 years, 5 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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BlueJay replied to the topic A Tale From Two Views in the forum Poetry 9 years, 5 months ago
I’m in a state of emergency
My body is alive with electricity
I didn’t volunteer to do this task
I’m a victim wearing a mask.
I am definitely not a librarian
Why should I have to care then?
When I saw what I would have to do,
I gave a yelled of surprise, it’s true.
And when I learn how it worked
An exclamation from me was jerked.
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Anna Brie replied to the topic Bible Challenge in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
My understanding of the difference between courtship and betrothal is that in courtship you have a formal time of getting to know each other on a deeper level and investigating the others beliefs to determine whether marriage is a good idea.
Betrothal on the other hand goes from friendship to engaged. They do get to know each other but…[Read more] -
Greta replied to the topic Workshopping/Critique in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@zcpeterson
I love your poem! Overall, I think the meter should be a bit more consistent (for example, in the last stanza), but other than that, it’s a great poem. 😉Or can hold every bird in it’s flight
That would be “Or can hold every bird in its flight.” Sorry, had to fix that. 😀
@sarah-hI’m not very good at critiquing poetry though; Kat…
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Snapper started the topic Fall and Winter Goals: Writing Club in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
Gather, fellow knights and warriors of this realm!
@Overcomer and I had an idea a little bit ago for the fall. Because summer is now over, (yay–Fall!) that means that The Awesome Summer Writing Club is no longer summery. So, without further ado, I will begin a new topic with the same principal.
We, as writer’s, will (or should, I won’t force…[Read more] -
Snapper started the topic Fall and Winter Goals: Writing Club in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
Gather, fellow knights and warriors of this realm!
@Overcomer and I had an idea a little bit ago for the fall. Because summer is now over, (yay–Fall!) that means that The Awesome Summer Writing Club is no longer summery. So, without further ado, I will begin a new topic with the same principal.
We, as writer’s, will (or should, I won’t force…[Read more] -
Snapper started the topic Fall and Winter Goals: Writing Club in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
Gather, fellow knights and warriors of this realm!
@Overcomer and I had an idea a little bit ago for the fall. Because summer is now over, (yay–Fall!) that means that The Awesome Summer Writing Club is no longer summery. So, without further ado, I will begin a new topic with the same principal.
We, as writer’s, will (or should, I won’t force…[Read more] -
Corissa Maiden of Praise replied to the topic Hi Everyone in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 5 months ago
@ZCPeterson, please don’t be scared. We’re all perfectly harmless, I assure you. (well, except for our various collections of sharp and very deadly weapons… but we can’t use those over the internet, so you should be safe. 😉 )
@BlueJay I think you know perfectly well what I mean. 😉
@sarah-h What did you think I meant? Certainly not anything…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic Art Work in the forum Art 9 years, 5 months ago
@sarah-h Professional in what way? it is certainly more than a hobby. She takes commissions and gives art lessons.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Art Work in the forum Art 9 years, 5 months ago
@sarah-h Professional in what way? She gives art lessons.
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ClaireC replied to the topic Bible Challenge in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@sarah-h, Oh the PAIN!! You must be half dead!!
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ClaireC replied to the topic Bible Challenge in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@sarah-h, what time is it there?
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ClaireC replied to the topic Bible Challenge in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@sarah-h, If you want discussions on this topic (and any other) from a Christian perspective with other teens, you could check out Revive (the Christian ‘Facebook’ I mentioned in the post above) I’m not on it, but my sister, HeatherC, is. If you join you can tag her and she’ll say hi. 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic Bible Challenge in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
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BlueJay replied to the topic Bible Challenge in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
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ClaireC replied to the topic Bible Challenge in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@sarah-h, I have no idea what the difference is. It’s something I have a lot of questions about, though, as it’s probably the most important decision you make in your life. Should you date? Should you kiss anyone before your wedding ceremony? Oh, so many questions… I say no to both those things as a personal standard, by the way. 🙂
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BlueJay posted a new activity comment 9 years, 5 months ago
@sarah-h No worries about the placement of the comment. 🙂 Thank you so much.
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BlueJay posted an update 9 years, 5 months ago
And a big thank you to all the people who brainstormed for me. I know some of you didn’t make it here before I cleared the topic, but I have figured out what to do. Grazie. 🙂
@kate-flournoy @faithdk @emma-flournoy @christi-eaton @daeus @adry_grace @alia @anna-brie @anne-of-lothlorien @hope @aratrea @clairec @spradlin @sarah-h @rolena-hatfield @jul…[Read more] -
BlueJay posted an update 9 years, 5 months ago
@clairec @kate-flournoy @anna-brie @sarah-h @spradlin
Please excuse and spelling errors in the thing I just sent you guys. I posted it before I proof-read it. *silly me* -
Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic The (Awesome) Summer Writing Club! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
So, (here in Virginia, anyway,) it is the (gasp!) last day of Summer! (Or maybe it’s tomorrow. We’ll stretch it into two days for extra effect) 😉 In honor of this momentous occasion, this dramatic changing of the seasons, I was wondering if you would all post an update on how you’re doing with your writing projects?
How did your Summer (or…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic The (Awesome) Summer Writing Club! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
So, (here in Virginia, anyway,) it is the (gasp!) last day of Summer! (Or maybe it’s tomorrow. We’ll stretch into two days for extra effect) 😉 In honor of this momentous occasion, this dramatic changing of the seasons, I was wondering if you would all post an update on how you’re doing with your writing projects?
How did your Summer (or…[Read more]
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You are most welcome, friend! 🙂 Glad you got it figured out. Happy writing!
@spradlin 🙂 *whispers* It’s ready for beta readers now. Psst, @daeus are you interested in reading “the Golden Conch”?
How many people should I send it to in at once?
@bluejay Yes, I am interested, but I’m a little swamped right now. I’m beta reading two other novels and Kate might send me the second piece of hers any time. Would it be alright if I postpone for a month?
Sure. @daeus
Btw I’m not sure you ever saw this so I’m posting it again, is this a haiku poem?
Soft kittens are cute
Fun to hold and to play with
Be very gentle.
🙂
@bluejay Yep.
Oh good. My youngest sister had to write one for school. She’ll be pleased to know that it was right. 🙂
LOL! Wish I had time to do the thing. SUBMIT IT WHEN YOU’RE DONE THOUGH! cuz that’s the cool thing to do. xD
When it’s done, it will be coming your way. But I hope you have patience cause I have a feeling it might be some time… XD
Haha! Not a problem! Can’t wait to see it. 🙂
@Bluejay I’d love to, but unfortunately I’m way to busy right now to take on any extra projects. Keep me on the list though. 😉 Perhaps a later draft…