Sarah Hoven

@jess-penrose Ohh, sorry! It’s an expression, but the way I wrote it did look a little odd. 😛 If someone has a mind like a steel trap, it means it lets nothing out—steel traps contain everything they catch. Thus, a mind like a steel trap contains and keeps straight everything it catches. So your brother must have a mind like a steel trap. 😀

He’s a really great character in that he’s real–he’s not a perfect villain, and there’s this strange thing about him where he’s fighting the urge to turn to the “light side”, something not seen much in movies.

@That_Writer_Girl_99 Precisely. 😀 I agree. Did you know he’s an INFP?

@Kate-Flournoy Um, ow. *chokes* If that is an accident it is…[Read more]

@Jess-Penrose Mind like a steel trap, eh? Whoa.

@Kate-Flournoy :/

@Kate-Flournoy Ugh. :/

What about Leia? She has to die somehow, doesn’t she?

Oh wait, you died. Oh well.

*bawls* I wasn’t ready for you to do that yet, Kate. :'(

@Kate-Flournoy That sounds very good. Him pulling her down and them eventually meeting in the middle.

That would be WOW.

Here are the smelling salts. *ss* Also—just being the voice of cheer here—you’re going to be living in a wheelchair after the seizure you have either way. If it does OR doesn’t happen that way. So just be prepared.

But…[Read more]

@That_Writer_Girl_99 From that, I take it, you’re not a Kylo Ren hater? 😀

*revives you* Wait till December is over to go into a coma.

What they said.

Daeus. O.O Now I know how much this means to you.

@Jess-Penrose

I’ve only ever seen TFA, but I want to see the rest. And I have had episodes 1-6 quoted to me by my brother. (every line, went for a whole day.) And the music. The music was played at the right times. So, I’ve heard the whole lot?

HAAAA! XD He must’ve seen it a few times.

@That_Writer_Girl_99 Did you pass?

@alia Yup. 🙂

Rogue One is awesome too.

Guys. Just. Guys.

The never-ending discussion.

Kylo Ren is awesome.

@daeus Looks good. *thumbs up*

@daeus I agree about the last sentence/paragraph thing (and most of what the others said about rewording throughout). I don’t think the whole thing should be dumped, but particularly just the last sentence sounds sort of pushy and/or excluding or something along those lines. If you were to cut it, it might need replacing with something else, but I…[Read more]

@rolena-hatfield That’s great! It’s really cute. 😀

@raevynstar I must decline (way too much going on 😉 ), but I hope you get the help you need.

@raevynstar Cool. 🙂 I’m in Southern Ohio.

@raevynstar Welcome to KP! Where do you live?

@xonos-darkgrate

Yes, humans. Those are the biggest monsters possible for a good story!

That is a huge truth. Humans will ALWAYS be more interesting to read about than any kind of creature. Whether they’re good or bad. 😛