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@ariel-ashira Hey hey! That’s awesome. 😀

@warrenluther04 I am lovin’ all the kapeefer literature you and Dekreel are writing! 😀 Great job! 😉

@seekjustice Yay, chapter swapping! Sounds great, thank you! 😀

Yes, that makes sense. I think I’m going to rewrite the first chapter, keeping everyone’s notes in mind. Jane said I was telling instead of showing a lot, so I’m going to try to work on that (maybe I should finish Daeus’ Show Don’t Tell course, hehe 🙂 ). So I’ll definitely let you…[Read more]

@dekreel this is totally awesome-sauce! I can’t wait until the next paaaaaaart! 😀

@warrenluther04 @jane-maree @rochellaine @skredder @seekjustice @anyone I forgot

Thank you all so very much for reading the first chapter of my WIP! I admit, I was really nervous about other people reading it, but you all were so honest and I will keep all of your advice in mind.

Considering how much I needed to work on with my first chapter, I…[Read more]

@warrenluther04 yeah, I’d love it if you would! 🙂 warning though; this is a really rough first draft

@jane-maree probably general overall chapter, but also stuff like inconsistencies (which some readers have already pointed out), and yes showing/telling stuff. Thank you!!!

@jane-maree you’re welcome, ’twas my pleasure 😉

@seekjustice okay, i think i let you have access. lemme know if it didn’t work.

@rochellaine just looked at it! hilarious! *looks at outlining notes to make sure something like that doesn’t happen* 😉 😀

@rochellaine haha, okay sounds good 😀

@rochellaine ah, no I didn’t see that! was it recent? then i might be able to find it…..

@rochellaine I’m gonna have to go now. I hope you get lots of writing done! 😉 I might be on again Monday, but if not, probably Thursday, Friday and the weekend.

@rochellaine Thank you so much for reading my first chapter! I’ve never had anyone read my first drafts before. like, ever. thanks so much for your honesty and help! <3 😀

@rochellaine that would be great, yes.

@rochellaine okay, awesome! 🙂

by the way, I forgot to mention to everyone to ignore the spelling/grammar mistakes 🙂 haven’t edited yet…

@rochellaine @seekjustice @dragon-snapper @dekreel anyone on? I’m writing some more

@rochellaine did it work? I hope i did it right…..

@kaya-young aw, you’re very welcome!

@skredder wow that’s amazing! 😀