Sink

@catwing I don’t know… Could you have? *watches you intently*

All right, then. Thank you, Wiser!

@rochellaine yeah, my dad is tired of me changing the scenes. Me too. XP bye!

@ariel-ashira oooohh…

@rochellaine Slowly… Trying to show more. But I may end up changing this scene.
@ariel-ashira Welcome!

@rochellaine @epicaddie2 @aislinn-mollisong @ingridrd @alia
I’m here editing, earlier than usual. 🙂

@jess-penrose No, you haven’t told me about passive voice yet. 🙂

@seekjustice That’s good to know I’m not alone. 😀

@supermonkey42 Thank you! Indeed it is.
0.0 I didn’t realize that. Please do that.

@skredder *nods* A bucket, indeed. Thank you.

@jessi-Rae Since he’s an actual person on here and other people would want to use him, I couldn’t have him die for real. Could I? *grin*
*thinks* You should thank the Wiser.
Thank you!

@rochellaine That’s her. *grins*…[Read more]

@supermonkey42 Thank you! Indeed it is.
0.0 I didn’t realize that. Please do that.

@skredder *nods* A bucket, indeed. Thank you.

@jessi-Rae Since he’s an actual person on here and other people would want to use him, I couldn’t have him die for real. Could I? *grin*
*thinks* You should thank the Wiser.
Thank you!

@rochellaine That’s her. *grins*…[Read more]

@christi-Eaton There’s a manga series, Manga Classics that adapts classics into graphic novels. I’ve only read the Jungle Book and Les Miserables adaptions. They were pretty good.
Some of Ted Dekker’s books have been adapted into graphic novels.
There’s also comic collections like, Calvin and Hobbes, Peanuts, etc.
That’s all I can think of off the…[Read more]

@filewriterbase13x Glad you like your final! 🙂
Now I just have to finish everyone else.
Though I did realize I made myself a bit to big. *shrug*

Oh, good. *sighs in relief* The Wiser isn’t dead. Thank you, @catwing! Or should I thank Kay? Or even the Wiser himself, for simply acting?

Anyway, this was great! As usual. 🙂

@jess-penrose Yeah, I have trouble showing, not telling. 🙁
Maybe after I go through all these and get the revised doc to you. I’m revising it in a different doc. 🙂
Just wondering, did you think I needed to develop the characters more?

@rochellaine @seekjustice I have to go to bed. Good night.

@seekjustice Unfortunately I’m editing, so no Word War.
@jesspenrose Yes I’m curing all those zombies you pointed out. Thanks again. 🙂

@seekjustice It has. 🙂
@jesspenrose welcome! I’m finally going through those notes you left me. XP
@rochellaine *laughs* Oh that’s hard.

@seekjustice I’m editing Finding Secrets. 😛

@ariel-ashira Oh, double neatness!

@filewriterbase13x YAY! If you need more details tell me. 😀

Unfortunately my character has stolen my next part. Thanks Kay.

Part Six
In Deep Waters (Hello, reader people :P)

/I could’ve done better./ I stared at the old bearded man lying motionless on the ground. His friends watched where the Catwing and narrator had vanished. /The doctor was a nice touch. But this death is too dull and failable./ A…[Read more]