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@salome01w4g, any time.
@xonos-darkgrate, https://docs.google.com/document/d/10s-ZbFiyZpzw7VMkC9uuV-o5RtEjc6NW1cj9kWu-yok/edit?usp=sharing

Okay! I think I’ve got it now. I still want to come up with a dramatic tagline, but the rest of it’s done. What do you think?

Trevor is in a mess. After traveling back in time, he and his sister get trapped in medieval England where a mad scientist rules the country with technology and terror. As war brews, Trevor gets the chance to prove his…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper @salome01w4g @daughteroftheking Okay, to answer y’alls questions my favorite food is hamburgers and fries and ice cream, I live in united states in the city but I prefer the country(on occasion;) ), and my favorite fictional animals are hippogriffs, dragons(only in the dragon slippers series) and Pegasus.

@catwing Thanks! These are so fun to make!
@salome01w4g Wow, nice!
@shannon Not horrible at all! 🙂 Love it!

@dragon-snapper Unicorns? Where? I have not meet a unicorn in this dimension.
@salome01w4g Thanks. A friend read a chapter I wrote that had chicken pot pie and said that’s what she was hungry for after. 🙂
I also invented a place called Dawn and Dusk. 😉

@salome01w4g Your birth year? *cough* You weren’t born in February were you? *cough* Our lives collide again.

@salome01w4g the singer was Nick Jonas in Les Mis. We found a lot of the things he did and said quite amusing.
I know! I shall miss you too. But never fear @catwing I’m bringing my editing with me and will work on it during the long car trip. 🙂

@raevynstar Hi! I am busy so I can’t right now… But a shall tag some people… Perhaps they can help you? …
@emma-flournoy @jessi-Rae @daughteroftheking @epicaddie2 @that_writer_girl_99
@salome01w4g @his-instrument @dragon-snapper @emily @shannon

@seekjustice Bye *sends you off with feathers and chocolates*
@salome01w4g Nooooooooo… Was I too crazy? *farantically flips through Catwing Handbook to Understanding Humans*

Also @dragon-snapper @catwing @shannon @emily @salome01w4g @daughteroftheking My family is going away this weekend so I won’t be around. Have fun writing and I will see you Monday!
(Nice to have you back too, Emily and Shannon)

@salome01w4g haha yes. I purposely said bloke because you said dude and that’s not really a word we use in Australia.
Yesterday my sister and I were trying to replicate the way an American singer was saying God. I don’t know if all Americans say it the way he was saying it or just his accent or because he was singing… I don’t know. It was funny…[Read more]

@daeus – great synopsis. I agree with @kate-flournoy about the first sentence. It seemed a little too long; not attention-grabbing enough..:)

And I liked the way @salome01w4g reworded your last paragraph.

Personally, I think it just needs a little bit of rewording; in places it’s kind of long and doesn’t seem quite “powerful” enough, but oth…[Read more]

Tags. @josiahdeboer @xonos-darkgrate @emma-flournoy @winter-rose @graciegirl @salome01w4g @epicaddie2 @catwing @that_writer_girl_99 @shannon

@koryn-koch there are only 10 regions, so if your region did average they would get at least 2 spots in the top 2 in each category, so… ;P
@aratrea Wow, way to pull the curtain away, also why fo you guys have forum guidelines? Are you guys trying to take my first amendment away from me, what’s next, the second 😉

@salome01w4g Yeah I’m joking, I…[Read more]

Yeah, I’m not planning on going overboard. Just adding bits in to make it feel like a well-told story instead of a history book.

@salome01w4g

@daeus, okay, yeah. I’m not that far into its development yet so I hadn’t thought of that. Huss had followers that others deemed “Hussites”. Do you think the story of one of them would make a good subplot?

@salome01w4g, yup. I’ll definitely keep that in mind. I’m not adding things like new storylines and stuff that’ll change what really…[Read more]

Hey guys, thanks!

@salome01w4g, it’s BASED on real events, but the fun part is filling in the parts where you don’t know exactly what or HOW something happened.

As for the subplots, @daeus, what do you mean? I was planning on having it go on almost like a chase. With people beginning to question their loyalty, more pressure on Huss to translate…[Read more]

@salome01w4g *waddles along, whistling somewhat innocently*

@salome01w4g All I know about Twilight is there are vampires. And it’s a romance. I don’t read horrors or romances (If the romance is a subplot I’m fine. *shrugs*). It is also popular. A lot of popular stuff is bad. So… If it is popular, I be careful.
*sighs with you* Yep. Leave it to them to fall for the guy who will probably suck their blood…[Read more]

@salome01w4g urgh! Twilight! *shudders violently*. A vampire and I think the other bloke is a werewolf? What is attractive about that? *continues to mumble incoherently* farewell, friend!