Rolena Hatfield

@rolena-hatfield Yes, more! 🙂 This is great. Does this story take place in England or America? It seems like a Wild West setting; is it? There is one sentence that looks like a mistake:
“He reached out and clutched the cards a cold sweat running down the back of my spine.” I don’t see anything else.

That’s awesome @rolena-hatfield! It definitely made me want to read more. It was an intriguing start. One thing I would change: you say “When I looked back up, a small form had crept to the doorway. She clutched the doorpost and her eyes searched mine with great concern. The owner’s daughter.” I would change the order of the last two sentences. 🙂

@rolena-hatfield It’s awesome. More, more, more. Please. No wait. *commands* more! *sounds to harsh* *begs again* please. 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

@Rolena-Hatfield Yes! I love The Secret of Moonacre, It’s actually based off a book so I’m told. It’s such an interesting but fun movie, plus you can’t go wrong with a tad bit of steampunk and fantasy. 🙂

So now I’m going to talk about my favorite movies.
However, Instead of saying that I have just one favorite movie, I’m going to say Pixar, yes,…[Read more]

@Rolena-Hatfield Rigoletto!! Yes! I love that one!

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#3 is the lie, I’ve only been to forty-seven states

*cheats and copies tags from book club* @graciekry @his-instrument @jess @clairec @the-happy-bookaholic @dragon-snapper @timothy-young @warrioroftherealm @winter-rose @ingridrd @aysia-serene @adry_grace @belegteleri @hope @overcomer @vanna @faithdk @jadamae @hislittlerose @hannah-krynicki @writefury @hannah-olsen @dbhgodreigns @wordfitlyspoken @han…[Read more]

Calling all people who have read any of Chuck Black’s Kingdom Series or Knights of Arrethtrae.
@graciekry @his-instrument @jess @clairec @the-happy-bookaholic @dragon-snapper @timothy-young @warrioroftherealm @emma-flournoy @winter-rose @ingridrd @christi-eaton @aysia-serene @adry_grace @daeus @belegteleri @hope @overcomer @vanna @faithdk @anna-bri…[Read more]

Calling all people who have read any of Chuck Black’s Kingdom Series or Knights of Arrethtrae.
@graciekry @his-instrument @jess @clairec @the-happy-bookaholic @dragon-snapper @timothy-young @warrioroftherealm @emma-flournoy @winter-rose @ingridrd @christi-eaton @aysia-serene @adry_grace @daeus @belegteleri @hope @overcomer @vanna @faithdk @anna-bri…[Read more]

@rolena-hatfield
Snacks are always important. I took a break to get cookies as well, so I guess we’re even. :p
I wrote 1,809 words. No, I’m not kidding. Don’t ask how I did that because I have no idea.

@rolena-hatfield Aaaaannd I’m still here. Ready for another round. On your marks, get set, write on!

@kate-flournoy @rolena-hatfield
Okay, I’ll take lunch since we all seem to be breaking for now. I wrote 533 words. Thanks for writing!
For future reference to anyone who will be writing in the future, I should be writing most of the day.
@kate-flournoy That’s fine! Good luck!

@kate-flournoy @rolena-hatfield
Okay, I’ll take lunch since we all seem to be breaking for now. I wrote 533 words. Thanks for writing!
For future reference to anyone who will be writing in the future, I should be writing most of the day.

@rolena-hatfield Yay! I’ll be getting lunch sooner or later, but I should be around for most of the day.
@kate-flournoy Are you still going?

@Kate-Flournoy NO! It’s good!! I love it!

When you start analyzing a dinner conversation from your character’s point of view.

@Rolena-Hatfield That’s hilarious, though. 😀

@kate-flournoy @rolena-hatfield
Let’s go!

Hey @Rolena-Hatfield and @Dragon-Snapper mind if I join?

@rolena-hatfield Yep, still here. 😀

@sarah-h Showell Styles was a Welsh author. I’ve not read any of his other books outside of the Quinn series, but if they are as full of adventure and humour as those, I’m sure they’d be enjoyable to read.
I have dreams of writing edge of your seat WWII screenplays…I’ll read something and file it away for “someday”. (Speaking of which, any…[Read more]

@rolena-hatfield Thanks for your feedback. 🙂 I’ll work with the forth intro as the beginning and incorporate the others into the story.
@dragon-snapper Oh my goodness, you just described the mom’s backstory 🙂 The girl is the main character, so I like your idea of having the other openings as flashbacks or details in the story. Thanks!
@jess…[Read more]