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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
@bluejay Oops, we were posting at the same time. 🙂 Wow, you did a lot. I got 227 words. How on earth do you fit a story into 100 words? I don’t think I could do that.
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Julia R. replied to the topic To all and sundry in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 8 months ago
@dragon-snapper: Why, yes, I have seen Big Hero 6! Have you read The Art of Big Hero 6 by Jessica Julius? It has some fantastic concept art pieces in it! By the way, dragons are great. Really, really great. Being a dragon sounds awesome ;).
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
@bluejay It’s been an hour, but I’m going to keep going a little longer. What about you?
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
@bluejay Sounds good. I’ll tag you if I have to stop early. Ready…set…write! 🙂
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
@bluejay Yay! Let’s do it! How long do you want to go?
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Editing Advice (Poem) in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
@overcomer I really like the first verse, and the way you repeat it throughout the poem. 🙂
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
@bluejay I’m going to write for a bit, if you want to join me. 🙂
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Editing Advice (Poem) in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
Thanks for your advice and feedback, guys! I’ll look over my poem and tweak it and get back to you. 🙂
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Julia R. replied to the topic Need Ideas for Fantasy Names (countries, people, etc.) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
Another way my sister makes names more interesting is switching out vowels in names. For instance…
“a”, “i” or “e” can be changed to a “y”
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Mallory O'Bier started the topic Editing Advice (Poem) in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
Hey, 🙂
So, I have this poem from last year that I know needs some work, (ahem, a lot) but before I hacked it to pieces I thought I would share it first and see what y’all think.
Does it make any sense? Do you have any suggestions? Any ideas? Give me your harshest criticism! Hahaha! 😉 (Seriously, please do! And tell me if it’s terrible!…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier started the topic Editing Advice (Poem) in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
Hey, 🙂
So, I have this poem from last year that I know needs some work, (ahem, a lot) but before I hacked it to pieces I thought I would share it first and see what y’all think.
Does it make any sense? Do you have any suggestions? Any ideas? Give me your harshest criticism! Hahaha! 😉 (Seriously, please do! And tell me if it’s terrible!…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier started the topic Editing Advice (Poem) in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
Hey, 🙂
So, I have this poem from last year that I know needs some work, (ahem, a lot) but before I hacked it to pieces I thought I would share it first and see what y’all think.
Does it make any sense? Do you have any suggestions? Any ideas? Give me your harshest criticism! Hahaha! 😉 (Seriously, please do! And tell me if it’s terrible!…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier started the topic Editing Advice (Poem) in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
Hey, 🙂
So, I have this poem from last year that I know needs some work, (ahem, a lot) but before I hacked it to pieces I thought I would share it first and see what y’all think.
Does it make any sense? Do you have any suggestions? Any ideas? Give me your harshest criticism! Hahaha! 😉 (Seriously, please do! And tell me if it’s terrible!…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier started the topic Editing Advice (Poem) in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
Hey, 🙂
So, I have this poem from last year that I know needs some work, (ahem, a lot) but before I hacked it to pieces I thought I would share it first and see what y’all think.
Does it make any sense? Do you have any suggestions? Any ideas? Give me your harshest criticism! Hahaha! 😉 (Seriously, please do! And tell me if it’s terrible!…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier started the topic Editing Advice (Poem) in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
Hey, 🙂
So, I have this poem from last year that I know needs some work, (ahem, a lot) but before I hacked it to pieces I thought I would share it first and see what y’all think.
Does it make any sense? Do you have any suggestions? Any ideas? Give me your harshest criticism! Hahaha! 😉 (Seriously, please do! And tell me if it’s terrible!…[Read more]
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Where do you live? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
@bluejay Oh dear. What kind of medication is it? I’ll be praying for you, and I hope everything goes well in October/ November, when you stop taking it. How serious is it?
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic The Hobbit in the forum Book Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
I love the opening too! Really the whole first paragraph is pure gold, but the first sentence hooked me. I’m pretty sure I held my breath when I read it the first time and every time since. I knew then and there that it was time to get comfy and settle in for a good story. (And I was prejudiced against it because I didn’t know what on earth a…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic The Next Book Choosing in the forum Book Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
Yay me! 😀 😀 😀
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic The Next Book Choosing in the forum Book Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
Is it too late to join? because I can’t resist. I love The Hobbit too much! Please say yes!!! @bluejay
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic The Sea in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
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