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Active 4 months, 1 week ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months, 1 week ago
My CC tutor’s granddaughter is named Lucy. She looks nothing like your Lucy, but every week we get a dose of cute baby pictures because we can’t resist and neither can my tutor.
Now every time I read your rps, what pops into my mind are big, curious eyes, and extremely fluffy pink baby slippers XD.
Gabriel Mai
“It can be stuffy,”…[Read more]
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months, 1 week ago
Lucille
The hatchet had a new cover where it hadn’t before. Lucy smiled and held it to her face to smell the rich leather.
If she was honest, sleep still sounded good. But sitting around for long felt dangerous, like playing hide and seek and staying for too long in a poor hiding spot.
Wearily, she tried not to imagine the headless man…[Read more]
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months, 1 week ago
I’ll let her know! :]
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months, 1 week ago
Gabriel Mai
Gabriel grabbed his mask, not yet putting it on, but letting it slide down until the red ribbon hung about his neck. He grabbed his bag, and Lucy’s hatchet, following her.
“Here.” He handed her the hatchet. “I’ll teach you how to use it later. If you’re going to carry something like that, you should know how to defend…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months, 1 week ago
AWWW Thank you 😊. That’s awesome! I’m glad she likes him, I might end up writing his story after I do some more with Baron.
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months, 1 week ago
My littlest sister wants to tell you she likes Gabriel very much
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 6 months, 1 week ago
I need criticism on this sketch. Especially the hair

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Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 6 months, 1 week ago
@mineralizedwritings @linus-smallprint
OH MY GOODNESS!!!!! It looks awesome!!!!! I love it!!!!
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months, 1 week ago
Lucille
Gabriel had a point, but the house held a certain uneasiness that Lucy couldn’t shake. She was already on her way out the door, but turned when he spoke. She tapped her forehead and flicked her hand, as if tipping an invisible cap. “We should go.”
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months, 1 week ago
Gabriel
Gabriel nodded, though he would prefer she slept more. “I assume we should continue then.” Gabriel stooped down and picked up a loose piece of twine he had missed on the floor from his earlier escapade. “I think I collected all your little things when you fell…Are you sure you don’t want to rest more? We aren’t going to…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Help again. This time with Baron in the forum Questions and Support 6 months, 1 week ago
ah, now it’s all coming back to me. Yeah, give him a will to live and the original ending fits really well. Otherwise it’s juts a little flat, which is why I remembered it the way I expected it to go when I read it the first time. No yeah, It’s coming back now.
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months, 1 week ago
Lucille
Lucy thought about it. She swung off the bed and began rearranging the quilts and coverlet. “I’m awake now.” -
Ruth replied to the topic Help again. This time with Baron in the forum Questions and Support 6 months, 1 week ago
XD But actually, in my memory (until you just recapped it) he was going to turn himself in and then they were attacked and he was killed protecting Jenna (?) and her family. I like that ending because Baron gave his life for someone instead of taking life…. but then that is also cliche for a redemption story (and cliche is not a…
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months, 1 week ago
Gabriel Mai
“I…don’t hear a man’s voice. At least, I don’t think so. It’d have to be a strange one.” He shook his head. “It doesn’t matter. Try to sleep again if you can.”
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic I DID IT GUYS, I WROTE AN ORIGINAL STORY in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 months, 1 week ago
Sorry, it took me a while to get to that thing, but I finally did!
What you’ve got looks all right. You’re setting up a war and a villain within their own ranks. The prologue does make this more interesting with the old warrior who doesn’t want to be a hero contrasted with his younger self, who is far more eager to fight. Keep it…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 6 months, 1 week ago
This year marks the 75th anniversary of Narnia. The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe was published back in 1950. It also happens to be 20 years since the Disney film was released. I promised my sister a Narnia illustration to celebrate it a while ago, and finally got around to finishing it!

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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Help again. This time with Baron in the forum Questions and Support 6 months, 1 week ago
In a book like this one it would be up at the top for me. It makes the end fall flat. *shrug*
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Help again. This time with Baron in the forum Questions and Support 6 months, 1 week ago
@ellette-giselle lol it’s not like I’ve ever done that in books so I’m not offended. I’ve just seen it happen.
tbh it is aggravating but it’s not as annoying as some other stuff people do in books so it’s pretty low on my list of Things I Hate In Books.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 6 months, 1 week ago
hey, dump away.
Well that’s good! (forgive me if you already mentioned it and I forgot, but do they know yet what the condition is that is being treated, or is this more of testing out theories?)
Well, friends of mine who have eating problems I always take them on a run or something or to go do some hard work. Nothing like exercise…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Help again. This time with Baron in the forum Questions and Support 6 months, 1 week ago
Honestly, I don’t remember my initial reaction, you would have to look back at the comments. XD But actually, in my memory (until you just recapped it) he was going to turn himself in and then they were attacked and he was killed protecting Jenna (?) and her family. I like that ending because Baron gave his life for someone instead of taking…[Read more]
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