Andrew

@theducktator

Aww, I’m gonna have fun drawing her!

If I can…

@loopylin @keilah-h @ellette-giselle

Leo

The boy was studying him like an interrogator gauging his every reaction. Leo’s eyebrows twitched. He kept his voice cheerfully neutral as he replied. “Ah. Then this place must feel strange to be sure. But don’t worry; confusion is a natural part of processing. Not that everything will one day make sense,…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

Lol! One of my brothers was born in Puerto Rico.

@grcr

Reddish blonde. I probably should have hyphenated it.

@highscribeofaetherium

@linus-smallprint

I don’t find it preachy. And that scene was soooo relatable. I feel your pain Martha. 🥺

@linus-smallprint

Yes, I am.

Aren’t you too?

@theducktator

Thank you for the description! I will get to this if I have time.

@linus-smallprint @highscribeofaetherium @ellette-giselle @grcr @rae @loopylin @keilah-h @theshadow @mineralizedwritings @whomever-I-forgot

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Here’s my description/scene! This is not a direct excerpt, but it probably will be once I get there. 🙂 Character name: Perpetua Grace Frankton

“Can I pet your doggie?”

Stephen looked down into a pair of large dark brown eyes. “Sure.” He told Phil to sit. The girl who had asked gave him a dimpled grin. She was a cute little thing, probabl…

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@ellette-giselle

yes, this fixes everything.

Good

Considering that I have only scene you talk about younger brothers and that you found Martha relatable, I guess yes, you are the eldest.

@linus-smallprint

yes, this fixes everything.

am I the oldest?
guess!

😂

@mineralizedwritings

Well, now you’ve learned a little more about describing characters and how that impacts how your reader imagines them!

@stephie

How far are you into the story?

@keilah-h

Ah good. Someone relates to Eric.

You should give a glossary of Rorian words at the end or something! It might help the jokes stick better. The explanations actually make it funnier than the jokes would be alone, but I still feel like something’s missing. I like it though, don’t remove it.…

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@koshka @keilah-h @loopylin

Rory

Rory glanced between the twins. “I don’t think I’m lost. I’m just confused…” he trailed off and found himself watching Leo from the corner of his eye. “You see, all the schools I’ve been in have been very… organized and grown-up. We didn’t have free time, we weren’t running around, and we certainly we never, e…[Read more]

@koshka I see! There was something about raspberry ice cream, and a “fanfic” someone made up about kapeefers lol

@keilah-h raspberry blood...go to the forum search bar and look up raspberry and go to a few pages back in the results. It was rapidly vanishing when I joined KP, but vestiges of the ancient KP symbol, the raspberry, were still in existence. I’ve tried to revive it a few times, but there are few left who remember those glorious days.

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@ellette-giselle @koshka @loopylin

Hunter

One of the girls raced over to Rory, who tensed up as she came close.

Wow, he was on edge. Even Crosshair wasn’t like that.

Rory looked to Hunter, who chuckled. “I’ve seen these girls around.” he said, his own tail lashing. “They’re nice.”

heyyyy how many days has it been since someone RP’ed?

i will totally get back to it if everyone else wants to. I am by no means letting Huntress and Sniper go.