Andrew

@grcr

Thank you! Honestly, I’m not certain what kind of dog he is myself.😂

@keilah-h

Lol, yes!

“In the veggietales universe, is being sent to the cutting board a criminal sentence?”

–my brother and his slightly disturbing thoughts

@grcr @linus-smallprint @anyone-I’m-missing

Deadline to submit your drawing is Sunday!

@linus-smallprint

Alan and his Old English cracked me up.

@linus-smallprint A little weird that the lyens would entrust the naming of their young to a species they think is inferior, but at least it makes sense now.

and yeah, judging from what I’ve seen on kentor names so far, Anamyth and Opitarus make sense too. I can’t tell on Iskyagus, but it seems like he should probably be a kentor as well, or some…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

It hasn’t been discouraging, as much as I was frustrated with myself because I felt like my writing ability was broken. I think Alcatraz has been messing with that.

Oh I am going to make him die just so that you never know what happened! That would drive reader’s insane!! That is such a good idea. I hadn’t thought of that!!!

I…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Happy you found that encouraging! Sorry if at times you have found what I said discouraging, I know I do tend to notice the negative more than the positive, and sometimes I just don’t know what to say. But I’m glad you have continued to write and have not given up!

As to if I think Noah is dead, I had the feeling he would…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

btw, I’ve got to know.

Did you think Noah was dead?

@linus-smallprint

Oh my goodness. Thank you so much!!

I am so, so happy! I felt like I was doing what you said, but each time you told me to do it again, and it was one of those things that was just out of reach.

I ended up deleting what I had written for this section after I read it to see where it was going, and then I just went for it. I…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

In this chapter, I felt more drawn into your story than I had before. Remember a while back when we were asking you to show us what life was like running an orphanage, wanting to get to know the kids more? You’ve done it here.

I felt the fun of playing with the children, I felt the worry for Noah and the foreboding of dread. Not…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

XD

@koshka @loopylin @keilah-h

It’s only fair to wait and let Hunter react to the fact that he almost got slammed into tomorrow. Plus, the twins are being silent things to trip over……

If no one takes this by the time I’m board then I’ll just go.

@koshka

I’ll wait a minute to see if anyone else takes this. And if not I’ll RP

@linus-smallprint

Righto.I should post as soon as I can after you or Keilah responds, so if you don’t get tagged I guess take a look.

@keilah-h

Here is another LONG section!!!

Aaron straightened slowly at the sound of the whistle that called for the work day’s end. His shoulder’s ached horribly and his raw hands burned. The callouses cou…

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@loopylin @keilah-h @ellette-giselle

Leo

Leo was about to lead the way down the hall, when, with a flurry of wings Hunter appeared beside them.

Which nearly got the kid slammed by Rory, who waved instead. Strange, but then this place tended to put himself on edge, so…

For a moment the boy was lost somewhere else. Seeing something else. Then…[Read more]

@keilah-h

will I never be rid of the influence of Lego ninjago

No.

@ellette-giselle

Okay. That’s not the hat I had in mind. What I was thinking of is probably too modern for your book. I was picturing more of the hat that Kalmar wears in Wingfeather Season 1, because that was what came up when I searched ‘traditional working class cap’.

(Also, just so you know, I noticed that a lot of people tagged me…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Okay. I guess that would also help bring not just the characters, but the world to life.

@theducktator

I guess I do have Alan scratching his elbow whenever he feels the guilt of having used magic. I’ll have to think of some for other characters. I feel Tyn and Eric would have some.

@stephie

I should probably pay more…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Alan is joining Stripe’s cause?

Yup

One question: What’s up with the names Cyrus, Anamynth, Iskyagus and Opitarus? Are these lyens? Kinda odd, because all the lyen names up to this point have been cat-related, and I can’t see any connections with these names.

Oh, I forgot to explain Cyrus’ name. When I introduced him, I couldn’t find…[Read more]