Andrew

@linus-smallprint

WHAT! He didn’t go save Martha!!!!

Alan! Grrrrrr!

It was a good chapter. I liked it. I especially liked the brothers, (John and James.) Their relationship is a lot of fun.

i don’t know who you meant by anyone going to far, but I don’t think anyone did. However, I thi9nk saying Alan is a murderer is going to far. He hasn’t…[Read more]

@esther-c

Thank you! I’m so glad you liked it!

Oh, i’ll keep those tips in mind.

@mineralizedwritings

Aw! THANK YOU SO MUCH!

I’m so glad someone read it!

I posted it a little while ago, but no one said anything, and I was thinking, “Oh dear, was it really that bad?”

lol.

I kinda felt like I was reading an anime lol.

I hope that’s a good thing!

@the_lost-journal

Nope, no war.

I should have snooped on your profile. Lol. Then I could have figured it out be reading more about you. lol.

thank you for posting and thus distracting me from wasting time on random TF2 art blogs and gawking at how cool other people’s tenth class ideas are

but yeah, anyway. I recently decided having ten classes kinda throws off the divisible by three thing the original nine had, so I was like “WELP, TIME TO MAKE TWO MORE FANCLASSES” lol

I…[Read more]

@theshadow I knowwwww

@esther-c yeah same. That happened to me once. The main character of my current WIP has the same name pronunciation as one of my cousins (different spelling though)

Fortunately I haven’t interacted with this cousin in like a decade so I don’t think she’ll be too offended about a name similar to hers being used for a character if she ever finds out.

@linus-smallprint wow!!

also, I’m not sure if you’re referring to Alan or Rour, but I think neither of them went too far. They both are wrong about something and think they’re right, and as such it’s messing with their minds.

@mineralizedwritings Just something I pulled off Planet Minecraft (a pretty reputable mod website)

It’s got the nine characters from a shooter game I like, and they hunt mobs for me. (They also have a penchant for randomly insulting them……lol)

I also have the Halo texture pack on.

ahaha the bundle update? I haven’t used them yet! Gonna…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Leo

“I know.” Footsteps in the distance clicked faintly in his ears. A buzzing radio signal flared nearby. The security team no doubt. Leo looked at Rory, eyes narrowing. “You ever climbed a brick wall?”

He took the Kid’s wide eyes as an answer. Leo leaning against a classroom door as he fished around for the master key. Two…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow

Who’s ready for the next scene?

Chapter the 22nd – The Murderer

I need to read Little House on the Prairie again.

The is one character in this chapter that I’m wondering if I’ve gone too far with him. Does it make sense why he does what he does in this chapter? (This…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I’m holding on to hope that Eric will realize how serious what he did was and come to a true repentance. Though it almost seems to me, (especially after he did that) that he wasn’t ever a true believer but the Saviour was more of almost a”lucky charm” to him. Something to bring him happiness and keep him safe.

Time will tell for this.

@the_lost-journal

Ah, she is vengeful and sad. You could give her a little peace at the end; maybe she finds out what truly happened to her husband.

@the_lost-journal

First off, I don’t know how anyone could think I was a guy. i mean, the way I write i’m clearly a girl, and if you can’t tell that, look at my profile picture.

second……

what meme are you talking about? I’m confused……..