Andrew

@ellette-giselle

Ooo, that does sound interesting. I’m gonna have to go see if I can find it.

@liberty

Reuven is a common Jewish name in that era. I actually named my Character Reuven before reading The Chosen. They are not alike at all. But, it’s still a good name. I read The Chosen on Monday. I had already started my book the week before.

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @grcr

Alright, I believe now we are back on track.

I’ll put a little from the previous section in here. We are now back to just after Joseph’s letter to Sabina.

…….

Sometimes I feel so inadequate teaching the people, especially when I train up Mr. Caddick, Da…

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@linus-smallprint

Oh good. I saw this and I was like, “Oh no, it’s a long response. This might be bad.”

Didn’t your mother teach you not to slam doors around?

Didn’t you ever accidentally do it when you were in a rush and weren’t thinking? lol.

Someone’s going to need to snap him out of it eventually, but for now, this is good.

Good. Goo…[Read more]

@koshka

Reuven (Robert or Bobby) Malter is a Modern Orthodox Jew, and a teenage boy. He is smart, popular in his community, and has a head for mathematics and logic. His father wants him to be a mathematician when he grows up, but he desires to become a rabbi. then on the other side, Daniel (Danny) Saunders: a Hasidic Jew, who is also a teenager.…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings @loopylin

Snowball!!!!!

(If you can)

@ellette-giselle

Looks good. This will definitely help it not to feel too fast.

At that moment, the door crashed open. Ezra jumped, and Joseph started to his feet, gripping the arm of his chair so tightly his hands went white.

“Hello father! I didn’t expect you home so soon!” Quin exclaimed as he bounded into the room.

Didn’t your mother teach…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

*Splutter* Texans weren’t made for this much snow!

Three more steps. Calion stood gazing over the edge into the chasm below. A river threaded it’s way down there, cutting a blue seam through a rolling green wood. A mile, two, down. A misty cloud rolled by, blocking the view and pulling his gaze back to the jagged edge just a…[Read more]

@jonas

*shrug*

You said it didn’t work, and I was just telling you it did.

😉

@whalekeeper

Okay. Sounds good!

@ellette-giselle

That sounds like more work than it’s worth.

Also, I think you can just backspace and retype the last letter of the tag.

@jonas @loopylin @ellette-giselle @anyoneintherescuegroup

I’ll probably introduce another character when you guys rescue Loopy’s character. Mine isn’t necessarily locked up but will notice the commotion and help when you guys need a quick getaway.

@jonas

COPY AND PASTING THE TAGS DIDN’T WORK. I THOUGHT YOU GUYS SAID IT WORKED!

It does work. You just have to put about five spaces between each one, and make sure there are no “.” after each tag.

All I’ve ever done on KP is copy and paste.

It works.

@liberty

There’s Josef, who’s Aryan German, Reuven, who’s Jewish, and Werner, who’s a boy from the alps and became a doctor.

I don’t think I’ve posted anything with Werner yet.

I’m glad you like them!

@whalekeeper @raxforge @loopylin @hybridlore @grcr @ellette-giselle

Rogun — Elderstrand (Group 1)

Taken aback, Rogun had to bite back an angry retort.

“If we stay here, we will die,” he said. “The Scrabblers will be here in minutes. If you want me to prove that you can trust me, I can’t, but I am bound by my honor to bring you out of this pl…[Read more]

@whalekeeper   @raxforge   @loopylin   @hybridlore   @grcr  @jonas

Leon and Julian —with Group 1

Julian slowly rose, his eyes narrowed. He took a few steps forward until he was standing right in front of Rogun. “Listen, I don’t know who you are, stranger, but Leon is hurt, and I think the best option is staying put.”

“Julian,” Leon calle…[Read more]

@rae

Okay. So, which group do you want her in? (If you don’t have a preference, I can help think of one.)

@whalekeeper @raxforge @loopylin @hybridlore @grcr @ellette-giselle

(I’m not normally going to use NPC POVs very much, but right now, this is more convenient than using Ellis.)

Rogun — Elderstrand (Group 1)

Rogun stopped and turned around as he realized no one was following. Mildly annoyed that the newcomers didn’t seem to grasp the urgency of…[Read more]

@liberty

Yes, Marta is blind. This is a huge hitch in the story………..

I do look for particular quotes like the ones I used, if that’s what you’re asking.

I’m glad I’m giving inspiration! Ooo, that sounds like such a cool story! I’d love to read it sometime! Mine takes place in Germany, because I find there are a lack of stories from…[Read more]

@liberty

Well, alright. I guess the snowballs can be a complement. lol.

what do you think of the snippets you’ve gotten so far?