Andrew

@ellette-giselle

Finally getting to this!

Characters:

~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

I think they all were pretty good.

~ Were there any character that need to be more engaging? If so, how would be some good ways for me to do that?

Uhhh…..If there were any, I don’t remember. (I have…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

 I remember this one gal in my homeschool group who had an obsession with Twilight at 14. Yuckyyy, and unrealistic.

ugh twilight *gag*

read a whole thing of essays on why it was so bad once and will never call my romance writing bad again. lol.

oh yeah and a contemporary/fantasy storyline is totally okay! I’m pretty sure…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

If you’re talking about CWW, no problem, it’s an optional challenge. :] You should tell your sister, though, that nobody actually shares their stories on the community. You only count up your words and submit the number each time you write. So her project wouldn’t be shown to anyone.

@linus-smallprint @rae @loopylin @godlyfantasy12 @ellette-giselle @hybridlore and whoever

I have a new project I’m excited to work on this week. Just spent an hour plotting the first half of it, but I’m still ironing out the wrinkles before drafting it. Some of that has to do with genre.

I think it’s going to have a lot of contemporary elements.…[Read more]

@janellebelovedpig @whalekeeper

I looked at this and showed my sister, but I don’t think either of us will be doing it this year. My sister doesn’t feel ready to share the project she is typing up and her WIP she is writing on paper. I would also like to take a break from writing and focus on some other things.

@loopylin and @theshadow

Just wondering if either of you are still reading through TNPT: The Cost.

@stephie and @keilah-h

Are either of you going to be filling out the feedback document I provided earlier?

@stephie

I read your to-magic-or-n0t-t0-magic document and it seems to me that there are more reasons for including it than excluding it. At this point all you’ve got to do is evaluate whether or not the reasons for excluding spell images are so strong that they cancel out all of the numerous reasons to include it.

I dunno, it’s a hard cal…

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@whalekeeper

You could maybe play off the fact that kentors naturally avoid confrontation. Although Tyn wants to face conflict directly, she might still be avoidant without realizing it.

Hey, that’s a good idea. There are already some inconsistencies in Tyn’s character that she is unaware of. This would fit her well.

I knew he wanted out of the…

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@ellette-giselle

There are definitely some people even in Christian circles who use dating unwisely. I remember this one gal in my homeschool group who had an obsession with Twilight at 14. Yuckyyy, and unrealistic.

My parents allow me to date for several reasons. They believe it is wise to develop an intuition with guys before choosing one guy…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

YAY!!!!!! I’m so excited to hear feedback!!!!!!

I’m so glad the rescue worked! I wanted a Stephen story and a Daniel story. The Daniel ending may be more cliche, but it’s just as true as the Stephen one.

Yup, Peter is back. I know his whole story and I wish I could have had more of it in, but Joseph and the others only got to…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Finished it!

I’ll get to answering your feedback questions later. I may take a month to reread the story again first. (*Goes and steals all sections of the book so I can read them offline*).

But for now, here is some initial feedback on the last bit:

I think the climax and the build-up to it were well done. As cliche as rescue…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I’m just comparing the way I believe to the way the girls around me in my home school group act with the boys around me. You don’t have to agree.

I can’t wait to work on Project Murcadox, I’m actually really excited. <3 Hehe

@ellette-giselle

Okay cool! I’m glad that works well for you and your church community. I bet it also works well for you because you’ve known the people in your church for a long time, so there’s a lot of familiarity. A sense of home.

Your picture of dating definitely isn’t the same as what we actually do in other Christian circles, though.…[Read more]

@hybridlore

wait what!!!! why do you think that!!!????

@whalekeeper yeah pretty much

@hybridlore   @theducktator

YAY!!!!!

@grcr

Click on your profile picture at the top right and hit “My profile” and then click “about” It’ll say your team on there.

@whalekeeper

You are going down!!

@hybridlore

KP is threatening to shut down… my link in my email didn’t work, so I’m a little concerned we’re gonna get locked out.

WHAT????

Nevermind, I figured it out. I’m a Detective!