@raxforge
Active 7 months, 1 week ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Alright then, got it! I guess I’ll make a lot faster progress than I thought then!
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Ruth replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 8 months ago
Glad you liked it
BTW did you re-use the names Fen and Tren from that one RP we had a while back ago?
Lol, you noticed. Yes, I did.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon Wow! That was fun.
funny side note, when you mentioned “reaching the Dell” I was like “someone else knows that word????” cause I never see it in anyone else’s writing these days, but I have a charrie named Dell so I see it often. LOL
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Hi…. (: in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 hellooooo again!
haven’t seen ya in a hot minute!
So you’re not really writing much, yes. But please tell me all the characters and stuff are still around.
Crosshair will never say it, but I think he’s been missing his feathery buddy Paxton.
in other news, I finished a fanfic for once, which has a new story…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
I’m pretty sure it’s the same book.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Started reading through your book, but have some confusion. I had started to read something you were working on around August and September last year before you decided to take a break. Is this the sequel you are working on now? Could I get the link to finish the first book please before I read the next?
I noticed you have…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 8 months ago
@rae awesome!!!!
Can’t wait for more!
Feedback time lol
Indeed, the fire showed his features mostly came from his human side, besides his grey eyes. His grey eyes were deep and filled with emotion
You don’t need to reference the eyes again. A better way of doing it would be like this:
…besides his gray eyes, deep and filled with…
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Ruth replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 year, 8 months ago
Oops, forgot to reply to your other question.
Yep, Robbie is mine! He was part of an old Historical Fic WIP.
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Ruth replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 year, 8 months ago
WAIT CAN YOU SEE INTO THE FUTURE?!
I am not kidding, there is a flour fight 😮 lol
lol, I KNEW IT!
It’s actually the first thing that pops into my mind when I put the words ‘charrie’ and ‘baking’ together.
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Ruth replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 8 months ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Alright, here we go!
Prologue
Rolling clouds blotted out any sight of the twin moons, and tendrils of fog floated in on a frigid breeze, curling up and around the two lone figures in the street.
Had a man been so unfortunate as to look out upon the street through the frosty panes as the two walked by, the sight would have…
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Ruth replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 year, 8 months ago
Uh oh, I have a feeling there will be a few flour fights with how terribly these teams get along amongst themselves. Lol, this will be great.
I can’t wait!
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Ruth replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 8 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 8 months ago
First story!
Clash of Winds
he cold little mouth of a winter night nipped at Max’s nose. His cloak was wrapped tightly around him, woven of a thin soft fabric that yet provided all the warmth of a few blankets together. Its color was shown to be green in the flickering rays of the fire, with the insignia of a Royal Guard of Loria upon the b…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 8 months ago
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Ruth started the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 8 months ago
The time has come.
I haven’t finished all of the short stories, but a good portion are done.
If you don’t know what The Baron Chronicles are, they’re my most recent writing project, an anthology of short stories telling a portion of the life of Baron, an assassin who turns away from his life of death to search for redemption.
I’ll be posting…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
So good! I NEED THE NEXT PART!!!
I can’t wait for more! This is awesome!
I was wondering……… because my brain has so much to keep track of…… would you mind sending a list of the names next to their occupation.
For instance:
Onnendel–> Elf.
I know most of them….. but then I second guess myself and…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
THAT IS LIKE ONE OF MY FAVORITE BOOKS EVER!!! I LOVE Tale of Two Cities! Dickon’s best work.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 8 months ago
Marcurious is amazing!!!!
I love these so much!! They’re probably the best you’ve done!
I want to see some of Eloy and Cassian!!!!
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