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Active 7 months, 1 week ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 8 months ago
LOVE IT!!
If Max and his family get hurt because if Rya…………. I’m not going to like you very much.
I really love how this story is going!!! It’s so, so good!
btw, one thing I noticed was Ruby started calling the girl by name while talking to Baron, but he never said her name. So, either that was a glitch on your end, or she saw…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Stormlight Archive in the forum Book Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
I’ve heard that there are basically three factors that make a character like-able: how “nice” of a person they are, competence (or alternatively, proactivity), and sympathy.
Of those, sympathy is the closest to relatability, but you can sympathize with someone who is in a completely different situation than you’ve ever been in. I d…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 8 months ago
Bye!!!
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Koshka replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
YES THE TRASHGRIFFINS
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Koshka replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Probably both? Like, I want to have a better idea of how it all works (and why it’s magic, if that makes sense. Like Wingfeather has the Stones at the heart of the world.)
But I also do want to have it kinda randomly fantastic. It all started with my twin and I sitting with our feet in a hot tub and deciding the water was heated by…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Um, yes?! It was a book before a movie, and the book is awesome.
And thank you. I love the little feathery guys too. Who needs regular street rats if you can have wats and wouses fluttering around.
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Koshka replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 8 months ago
AHHHHHH! SHE IS HERE?!?!
*Ahem*
Lovely aesthetics. I have never actually read Peter Pan or seen the movie, but I did just finish a rewrite that has definitely spiked my interest.
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Enid replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 8 months ago
I could fangirl all day over Secret of the Wings. Except that would bother people, so I choose not to. (You’re welcome, random people around me.)
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Enid replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Yeah, so it’s still floating around your brain like you just discovered it. I can totally see that working as a soft magic system. Is this something you want to solidify more, or is it goig to be fantastically random? (Either is great. ;])
trash griffins
I am also interested
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Enid replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 8 months ago
Love the genderbent Smee
I choked on my own breathing 🤣😭
It makes me so sad they didn’t do it. I think there might be a book series out or releasing which is written about Tinker Academy. That’s all I’ve heard. I found a fun video essay about it on YouTube, but haven’t finished it. Tinkerbell was such a thing for me as…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Hmm. I do have a series with a magic system, but as it’s a series I haven’t started writing yet (just outlining and world building *shudders*) the system isn’t all figured out.
But it’s like Wingfeather or Ella Enchanted (the book) style magic where it’s more a part of the way the world works than the regular book magic (not sure if…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 8 months ago
Oh my goodness, have you ever heard of the Tinkerbell movie that never finished production? It was called Tinker Academy or something, and rumor has it, it was going to be steampunk themed. I can’t believe they didn’t make it.
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Enid replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 8 months ago
(YES HE IS LIKE IN HIS TWENTIES. LOVE ME A HOT VILLAIN ROFL)
GIIIIRRL the darkness has overtaken yoouu… 🤣🤣
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Enid replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 8 months ago
Ooohh funsies! Tinkerbell is such a favorite of mine, and I like the boots you gave her on the moodboard. It looks very accurate to her character if you took the story in a more serious fantasy direction.
Oh, I just noticed the crocodile. Hehehehehe.
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Enid replied to the topic Going Back To An Old WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
*Starts laughing* *Tries to catch up with you*
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Enid replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Tagging people I seem to remember using magic before. I’m not sure if y’all are the right people, I apologize if you aren’t. @godlyfantasy12 @rae @highscribeofaetherium @loopylin @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @savannah_grace2009
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Enid started the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Magic systems are such a struggle sometimes. Sometimes it’s something as simple as the elemental power of fire, and sometimes it is something as complicated as the periodic table of elements. They are so fun, and yet so hard to get right. XD
This is a topic to branch off the new world-building topic, so @raxforge , I dedicate this to you, and to…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Going Back To An Old WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Yeah girl. Look at me. *Presses face into the screen* That’s a full 50,000 words. That’s no simple feat. 🥰 And you actually have words on the page which can be edited and made into something even better! It’s not like you’re working with an empty document here, this is a seriously already finished first draft.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic How do you world build? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
My pagan gods are simply known as Them, because I couldn’t think of a name.😭
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Enid replied to the topic Going Back To An Old WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
I was reminded of something one of yall had said about maybe working on another WIP since maybe I’m just burnt out a bit on this one right now?
You should do that!! You’re not giving up on November or Paxton or anyone, you’re just giving them time to rest and develop in your subconscious. I often switch between projects when I feel burnt out. It g…[Read more]
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