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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
@stephie that is actually a good way of looking at it
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
I did not end up finishing the show. My siblings watched too far ahead of me, and the school year was starting. :’)
aww man!
I hope you’ll get around to it eventually, it gets GOOD. Like, intense good, not that it wasn’t already phenomenal.
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Enid replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
Hehe. It is good, but only if you don’t mind some crass humor now and then. And the episodes have to be taken in small doses.
I did not end up finishing the show. My siblings watched too far ahead of me, and the school year was starting. :’)
Ah, it’s kind of funny when you watch a show ti the…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 7 months ago
I’m also glad you’re having fun with something fresh, after all your other projects made you tired. :]
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Enid replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 7 months ago
Yayy I read them!! Congrats in the new project and the progress. :-p
I really like how smooth and descriptive your language can be. Since I read some of Guardian Angels, you’ve always written very peaceful, poetic descriptions, and that’s one of tour strengths.
You also do a good job giving each character some defining traits, so they aren’t…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic My New/Old WIP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
@whalekeeper btw did you finish The Bad Batch? I was listening to a remix of its theme song and was reminded that you were watching it.
Man, I still love those characters, even if I’m not currently writing a WIP with them in it. I might, though–I have a few ideas still floating around.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
I also have been busy lately. (I’m back at college this week.) I know it’s been a while. I’ll write something next time I have enough time to do so.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
 It would be really heart-wrenching if the villain killed one of the main character’s friends and sapped them of their power.
*cackles* Or one of the main characters.
Maybe the elemental people have really cool appearances to indicate their element.
At least the main character ones kind of do, which is making it really hard to find re…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
@linus-smallprint I like that idea. While I didn’t have too big of problems with the old one, this new one is a good trade-off and makes more sense to the storyline.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
*facepalm* I just remembered I never filled out the feedback document. I’ll do that soon.
No worries. I look forward to your thoughts!
This seems like a good compromise. I intend to continue reading. Do you know when book 2 will be done?
Awesome! I intend to finish a draft of it this year. Hopefully with some time to spare before 2…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
awesome!!!!
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
*facepalm* I just remembered I never filled out the feedback document. I’ll do that soon.
This seems like a good compromise. I intend to continue reading. Do you know when book 2 will be done?
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
My plan is to start on this at the beginning of Febuary
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
of course, I haven’t read the changes yet, but from what I think I’m understanding you saying, this seems like a really good option. I’m definitely still going to be reading. (unless I end up hitting some snags with the new way you chose to do this, and then I’ll let you know if I need to stop.)
Thank you! I’m happy you approve…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
of course, I haven’t read the changes yet, but from what I think I’m understanding you saying, this seems like a really good option. I’m definitely still going to be reading. (unless I end up hitting some snags with the new way you chose to do this, and then I’ll let you know if I need to stop.)
I’m really excited for book 2!…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @theducktator @whalekeeper @stephie
Okay. It’s taken some time. I’ve put a lot of thought into this, but I’ve finally decided on what to do with my magic system.
I decided to change it up a bit.
We won’t know exactly how it works. One reason why I’ve decided on this is because of the narrator. He, being someone who…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Yes!!! Only about a week! I can’t wait!!!!!
Hmmmm…. can you know the name and characters?
No.
I think I’ll just wait and let the suspense build. 😁
(You gotta let me have some fun) lolol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
@linus-smallprint @whalekeeper yeah, for some reason most modern 2D animated cartoons really turn me off. IDK why, but the only 2D show I ever actually liked was a Tron-themed one that ran for only one season.
Those quotes are utterly hilarious though, more would be greatly appreciated lol
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago

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