Andrew

@savannah_grace2009

I dragged myself to co-op anyway. 🙁   I just finished your prologue. It’s good, but you overuse italics.

@freed_and_redeemed First off, these boards are cool and the characters look amazing.

Second, what a weird coincidence in your name and role selection for the female character—“Jaelryn” is weirdly close to “Jaylen,” the name of a character I have whose codename is Huntress. Her hair’s a bit shorter and darker than your character’s, and her eyes…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Nice! Jared’s is my favorite.

@freed_and_redeemed

Fantasy is my favorite genre! I want to see aesthetics!

@whalekeeper

Lucky in some ways, unlucky in others. XD

Ehh, that’s all characters though.

@linus-smallprint

I’d like to see a drawing with Charles and Alan together.

@linus-smallprint

I’m not sure I like that last comparison. Kalmar is amazing, and Eric…drives me crazy. No offense. I’m just still mad he betrayed Martha.

Okay, here’s a few. I was also told that Zlatin Vratisin is a lot like somebody named Balian…except that I was also told not to watch that movie… *is concerned for my character*

Seriously contemplating posting some rough character designs. I’ll think about it.

@keilah-h

Lucky Barnes, your author lets you have good things. Sniper’s parents will be dead halfway through the storyline and he’s still a bit messed up from it afterward. And it’s not even my fault.

Lucky in some ways, unlucky in others. XD I decided over the past year or so that I don’t like writing characters with just trauma+healing as thei…[Read more]

I’ll study the original artist’s scattered drawings and see if I can throw together a rough timeline.

@thearcaneaxiom I guess. Also it’d fit the video game characters who are the main players in the crossover, who all come from games set on Earth in the time periods between 1960 and 2020. So they don’t have to change too much, but neither are they the same.

@whalekeeper

Yup, even if the relationship is kind of distant.

He’s kinda the same.

I thought about killing off the parents, but Barnes has enough sadness already, and I felt it would be appropriate to give her a family to support.

Lucky Barnes, your author lets you have good things. Sniper’s parents will be dead halfway through the storyline and…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

Either you have a connection to supernatural powers, or I’m just very predictable

Nah, you’re just that predictable. No offense, if our roles were reversed and you came to me with a Bad Batch or Team Fortress fanfic idea, I’d react pretty much the exact same way.

Cool! So is this in any way parallel to the actual Avatar canon, a…

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@koshka

Rory

Rory leaned his head back and closed his eyes. The bus began to move, and he opened his eyes a crack. There was a young man who seemed to be sleeping in the corner of a seat several rows up. He had his hands shoved into his pockets. Rory looked down at his own pants. There were big pockets in them. He cautiously shoved his hands…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

XD

Leo

He bit back a grin. “Like they always say, it’s not save to jump out of a moving vehicle.”

The lorry door whooshed open. Silvia led the group aboard, waving their bus card under a the scanner. Leo helped Rory up the steps as inconspicuously as possible. The lorry was mostly empty this early in the morning. Their few…[Read more]

@koshka

Rory

Took Leo’s hand. “Uh…. the last time I road one of these I was chased down, jumped off the moving vehicle, and then was tackled into a store, almost hit by a car, and beaten up in an ally.” He let out a deep breath. “Yeah, I’m ready.”

(Rory tries his hand at sarcasm…… hmmmm. Leo’s influence is doing…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Of course! Yes, prayer is the best thing. He really will speak through you.

idk about the account. My computer is flipping out today.

@ellette-giselle

Silvia

Spangled darkness in a thousand colors. Gleaming nebula. White dwarfs.

Silvia blinked away the swirling images. Another time maybe. She’d fly again. She shrugged.

“Just wondering. Not many people around here have.”

She turned her head, catching the distant rattling of the bus coming up the street. A sigh brushed past…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

-Me being chronically inactive cause I’m about to serve a mission

-Someone mentions Avatar

-Me, breaks through the ceiling falling before you

I am here

AHAHAHA how did I know you were gonna do that?

Not sure what issue you would have…although there is one note I personally don’t like is the implications of Aang’s past lives…

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