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Active 7 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Great job!!!! I really liked it! I sure was nervous for them!
Poor Riker. I am really excited to see Erich show up!! He was a character I really liked from the last book. I’m really happy to see him again. I hope he gets a lot of “screen time”. 😂
I am wondering why Leon and Riker seem to be struggling with the lessons we…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
@keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @hybridlore @linus-smallprint
So, in answer to all the questions:
the laptop did an un-authorized update. So while I hit save on all my documents, I still had them minimized instead of fully closed. Normally it tells me about the update and offers a time. I then shut everything fully down, make sure it’s…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Umm… Perehapes he was a slave, or at least treated like one, earlier in his life, along with his brothers and cousins. They escaped, and tired to help other slaves.
🤨
I wrote like two paragraphs of his backstory.
This is Omar we’re talking about.
Have you read the section where he introduces himself to Leon??
Okay l…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic What Happened to the Moderators? in the forum Questions and Support 1 year, 5 months ago
🎵How do you join Kingdom Pen?
You just fill out a form!
I tried that, but they work no more!
That’s odd.
I know I thought for sure!
Have you tried the contact page?
I’ve gotten no reply…
Oh, that used to work, but now it won’t.
I think that I might die.
Where have all the moderators gone? What happened to the articles? The new people…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER posted an update 1 year, 5 months ago
My KPversiary was the 10th. I’ve been on here for a whole year now!
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FIREQUACKER started the topic What Happened to the Moderators? in the forum Questions and Support 1 year, 5 months ago
What’s going on here recently? I know @keilah-h ‘s brother and @linus-smallprint ‘s sister have applied to join and haven’t gotten an email and I haven’t seen Kathleen in months. It’s been a long time since we’ve gotten any new people or had any articles/stories published. @kathleenramm are you still around? @reaganramm is the only one listed on…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Noooo, poor Tyler. 😭
“I’m not sure. I’ll have to discuss it with your dad first. Maybe we can talk about it during dinner.”
As much as Hallie hated to have a conversation like that over dinner in front of all her siblings
Hallie could feel the curious, snickering gazes of her five other siblings boring into the back of her head
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Contemporary writing in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
AHAHAHAHAHA
(or whatever Snipes’ laugh is like)
even the posts about me being a simp??? Lol
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Poor Riker. I hate Franz.
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Ruth replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 5 months ago
Chase is glowstick

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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Ouch. Leon, you’ve still got a pocket full of broken glass to work out.
Also…how did Erich end up in the US Army?!
(thank you for hitting Franz for me, Leon)
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 5 months ago
@whalekeeper lol the rock one
noooo pikachu don’t do it
I wanna say my characters are not glowsticks, but then I realized that one of them is kind of a literal glowstick cause he has a few light-up scales on his body that are bright enough to shine through his clothes. And he has a traumatized life to match (although that wasn’t really my…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
@loopylin lol
I know how to make pasta, grilled cheese (and turkey melts, which are like grilled cheese but you put turkey inside it underneath the cheese), rice, and I think I have recipes for salmon, both baked and grilled, but I wouldn’t remember it off the top of my head.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
@linus-smallprint great job! I gave you some edits and suggestions.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
@ellette-giselle oh no!!! how did that happen?
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Ruth replied to the topic Help on writing an impactful last day in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
interest/curiosity
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Ryla
Ryla stopped as she heard loud chatter. Maybe if she just stood against the wall and stared at the floor people wouldn’t notice her. Suddenly a boy shrieked and fell over her foot. Ryla started. The boy looked up at her.
“The floor… What a great place to delve in the deep depths of sorrow and ponder unanswered questions,” he…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Help on writing an impactful last day in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
This had better not be Baron!
I’ve been wondering this too. One of my characters is in a similar predicament. Like Whaley suggested, she wrote letters to those she loved. Some of this will depend on whether your character is at peace with their death or not. *subscribes because I’m stuck too*
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Koshka replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 5 months ago
But what if someone were to hide behind the corner with a spray bottle and keep the rock wet on a sunny day?
That’s what I think of every time I see that picture.
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