Andrew

@koshka

You alive?

Vyette struts in.

1. What is your full name?

Vyette Aramell Vallin [I think this is entirely different in my notes somewhere…oh well]

2. What is the most important thing the average person should know about you?

I am stunningly beautiful and my father has money.

3. What is your body language right now? [Describe them in the interview,…

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First person present writing. I’ve liked books with this style, but it’s not my favorite.

Romances where it takes less than a month for characters to fall in love.

Pop culture references. I hate it when books are full of pop culture references. Granted, this may be because I’m a very sheltered homeschooler and get none of them.

Why is every…[Read more]

Now it’s Celarent’s turn. Then maybe I’ll do Vyette…I’m having way too much fun with this.

1. What is your full name?

Celarent.

2. What is the most important thing the average person should know about you?

I am a man of mystery.

3. What is your body language right now? [Describe them in the interview, sitting/standing, fidgeting, etc.]

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@whalekeeper

I’m so curious about Barnes right now.

@grcr

I’m short tho, so height problems frequently plague me.

Same, Flaz.

@whalekeeper

I may do this for other characters that need more development, but I feel like writing in Ayla’s POV right now.

*Ayla screams* An interview? I shall be famous!

1. What is your full name?

Ayla Elizabeth Anderson [I may change the last]

2. What is the most important thing the average person should know about you?

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@theducktator

Okay okay, she’s very important, I just couldn’t think of anyone more important to interview. XD

@loopylin

LIE. Literally just lie, Barnes already did.

?!? Who?

Seb, I’m interviewing her post-midpoint in the story I guess. The story spans a couple years.

Lucille, I thought you were single

She’s private. It’s complicated. I shall…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I can’t think of anyone important to do, so I’ll just go with Barnes

Ouch. Poor unimportant Barnes. XD

Everyone’s characters are awesome. I still haven’t finished typing up mine yet lol

I’ll do it myself. And I can’t think of anyone important to do, so I’ll just go with Barnes

1. What is your full name?

“Lucille Pallas Barnes.”

2. What is the most important thing the average person should know about you?

“Do not stand in front of me when I am walking. It will be dangerous for you, because I’m not easy to stop.”

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Yay, people want to do this 🙂

Wordy writing styles.

As Andrew can testify, more than once I have criticized books for wordy writing styles.

I’m not saying writers should state things as brief as possible, but writers shouldn’t take a paragraph and fill it with needless words. It bogs down the reader. There’s a balance between adding needless words and being too brief.

I think I did this with Silvanis…But I did punch him last night for no good reason so he might be pretty hostile so I’ll do…Nar I guess just cuz I was looking at an old drawing of her today

1. What is your full name?

“Narray Mae Nayhelm, but everyone usually calls me simply Nar.”

2. What is the most important thing the average person should…

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@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h

Chapter 19 out!

@the_lost-journal lol you’re welcome.

@ellette-giselle
Yes, I did get those comments. Thank you! I’ve been a little busy lately finishing up final assigments, so I wasn’t able to get to replying to them until now.

@the_lost-journal you’re welcome! She’s a very interesting character!

@the_lost-journal

why is Carrot Cake actually so cute though??

she reminds me of Pyro a bit lol