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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
Chapter 23!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Writing Neurodivergent/The Psychological Issues of Characters in the forum Characters 1 year, 4 months ago
Oh really? I love them. It’s so fun to start tying them together in subtle ways.
In the first one, all three end up frequenting the same cafe at different times, and only a few readers pick that up because I never state the name, but I describe the surroundings the same. Things like that.
One of the MC’s works with another…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@trailblazer I remember the Narnia quote!
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Ikr? Awesome
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
ok but looking at it even closer you can see little shockwaves from the bullets right before they strike his belly/chest. That’s DETAILED.
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Graphic novel artists are the goat, for real. I don’t know how they do it.
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
my brain: he just got SHOT and is BLEEDING OUT IN A FLOODING UNDERWATER FACILITY and you’re commenting on the LINEWORK????
Having no emotional connection to Sniper, my eyes immediately go to the art technique. I’m heartless. XD
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Enid replied to the topic Writing Neurodivergent/The Psychological Issues of Characters in the forum Characters 1 year, 4 months ago
Multiple POVs are lowkey traumatizing for my brain because you have to tie so many different colored strings together. It’s madness. Madness, I tell yea.
Escape while you still can… *Gazes into the distance* *Flops face down into my pile of manuscripts*
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@loopylin @the_lost-journal oh man these are flippin’ hilarious!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@whalekeeper haha! I’m decently nice to my characters…..sometimes. There’s torture on the menu, but it’s not always.
I like the line work on that panel, verrry nice.
my brain: he just got SHOT and is BLEEDING OUT IN A FLOODING UNDERWATER FACILITY and you’re commenting on the LINEWORK????
jk I love the linework too and have tried to replicate…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@whalekeeper LOLLLLLLLLLLL
mentally broken snipers are my boys
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Writing Neurodivergent/The Psychological Issues of Characters in the forum Characters 1 year, 4 months ago
Ooo! Cool!
I did one with the first book in the series and I’ve decided to keep going with it thought the whole trilogy.
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
🤣 I figured Crosshair would go through something like that since you like him so much
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@whalekeeper ahhh whoops!
well since you’ve already been spoiled, I’ll explain: Crosshair saves another trooper’s life, but the Empire isn’t willing to help him and leaves them both to die in the freezing cold. so Crosshair’s just like “forget this” and decides to defect from the Empire (finally).
Not before he nearly freezes and the other guy…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Well then, you’re much less responsible for torture than me, lol. I still haven’t found anyone who’s done the same things I’ve done.
I like the line work on that panel, verrry nice.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
I wasn’t responsible for this either:

slight blood warning I guess? it’s not really that bad but still
hope I don’t get kicked off the site for this lol
he lives btw, he’s all scarred up but he makes it out okay.
After 6 hours of being operated on. -
Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
I know nothing about season 2 girl, I haven’t watched it. XD
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Enid replied to the topic Writing Neurodivergent/The Psychological Issues of Characters in the forum Characters 1 year, 4 months ago
But it’s a three-way POV, so there are two other MCs.
Three-way POVs for the win. 🙃 I’m doing the same thing with my dream project. It’s so complex though, takes forever to figure out. But it is easier to make one MC less likable and tuck their POV under the rug until they’ve developed enough to root for.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Or this:
(again, spoiler warning, I’m so sorry)

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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@whalekeeper lol
Although, in my defense, I’m not responsible for some of the stuff that happened to myÂ
stolenadopted characters.For example, you can’t say I was behind this:
(u did watch season 2 of bad batch right?? I hope so cause if not, sorry for the spoilers)

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