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@koshka

Aw thanks!!!

Would you agree, @power ?

Any suggestions. (besides the odd shapes near his neckline…. which was a reminder for me to clean it up with a brush but I forgot until just now.) and the couple typos already mentioned?

@rae That sounds cool!

@ellette-giselle I don’t know. Either way could work.

@ellette-giselle

Lovely! It looks like a book my brother would pick up at Mardel.

@keilah-h

Possibly, or it could be a different insignia altogether depending on the Sector. I;’m not sure yet. What do you think?

Thank you for the cover suggestions!!!!!

Yes, I found a few typos! Whoops, you found one I didn’t.

Good thing you looked. XD

Oh, never mind, you found the typo.

Other than that, the cover looks beautiful.

Also, I have a few suggestions for the back blurb.

• You accidentally wrote “These children are forbidden to form any emotional that might hinder their unwavering loyalty.” Should it be “emotional bond” instead?
• “Jonathan, the second-born” should maybe be something like “Jonathan, a second-born.” But that one can stay in if you really want…

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I already found a typo.

And something wonky is up with his outline…..

@ellette-giselle That looks really good!!

I’m assuming the number changes for each sector.

It reminds me a little bit of the insignias my brother designs for his Icebreaker Empire universe. (He hopes to someday make a video game with a tie-in book series.)

@koshka    @keilah-h     @elishavet-pidyon      @theducktator     @grcr     @whalekeeper    @power    @hybridlore

Here is the cover of the book. I’m gonna leave this link up for a bit and then take it down.

Any thoughts?

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@hybridlore

Thank you!!

People wanted to know what the insignia on the uniforms was, and it took a bit to design it, but I think I pulled it off.

Glad you like it!!

@koshka    @keilah-h     @elishavet-pidyon      @theducktator     @grcr     @whalekeeper    @power    @hybridlore

for everyone who was asking, I finally designed an Insignia. What do y’all think?

@hybridlore

no prob.

I finished your WIP this morning and I gotta answer your questions today too!

@ellette-giselle yay!

@koshka    @keilah-h     @elishavet-pidyon      @theducktator     @grcr     @whalekeeper    @power    @hybridlore

I”M HOME!!!!

Now to look at the doc for the first time in weeks!!!!!!!!

Also, as soon as I get the question I posted answered I can start on the next step. 😉

@ellette-giselle I know right? It’s hilarious!

@keilah-h

It’s super funny that we write similar characters at the root, but they are totally different on the surface!

@ellette-giselle I love those lolllll

why are those so much like the things my characters would say (the first one is such a Blue and Rinzler kind of conversation to have lolllll)

@rae

fun!!

you know, if you don’t want to postpone, then would cancel either. I’d just go with the 1 or 2 friends who can make it. Sometimes a really small group is a TON of fun and it’ll end up being some awesome memories!

For anyone who still reads these…

”what if I fall?”

“you won’t.”

”but what if I do? “

”then it will hurt horribly for a few seconds before lights out. “

”Oh….. that’s comforting.”

“yep! Now get going!!”

Two of my characters:

(MC guy just did something to save MC girl- his new bride- and it was super dangerous.)

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