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@raevynstar Hey! I’d love to read it, but unfortunately life is busy right now. 🙁 I’m really sorry!

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Welcome to Kingdom’s Pen!

Our family really likes 21 pilots as well! What’s your favorite song by them?

@raevynstar Welcome to the Kingdom of Pen! I am Catwing, Abassador of the catwings of Allore. *throws chocolate* What do you like do besides write?

I just read it. Overall, I thought it was okay. A few mistakes like a random letter or such. Maybe it’s just my eyes. If you were seriously heading for an unlikable main character, you really achieved it! (not to offend you or anything)

I think it’s pretty good, but what I caught was that occasionally there were gaps or something like that.…[Read more]

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I think you could do one of two things. You could go with what @daeus said and make her completely confident in herself…or you could make her doubt herself and her abilities. Maybe she’s really insecure and doesn’t quite know who she is. Anyway, just some thoughts.

@raevynstar *grins from ear to ear because I loooove The Secret Garden* I found the article really helpful when it comes to my unlikeable characters. It might not be exactly what you’re after, but there are some good points in there. 🙂

@raevynstar I wrestled through the same question when writing my second book. I think the key is to not make Fiona completely unlikeable. Give her some likeable traits and give the reader some hints that she’s eventually going to change. If you can also give her sympathetic motivations for her unsympathetic actions and show us what sort of things…[Read more]

@raevynstar Confidence is key. A good spoiled brat sees the world in black and white. Their confidence in themselves is unflinching and they don’t consider other ways of looking at things. Such firmness inspires respect, even in fools.

Don’t know if that fits your character, but it’s one thing that works really well.

@raevynstar I must decline (way too much going on 😉 ), but I hope you get the help you need.

@raevynstar Cool. 🙂 I’m in Southern Ohio.

@raevynstar Hi! Welcome to Kingdom Pen! Have you read Harry Potter?

@raevynstar what’s the word count??

@raevynstar Unfortunately, I can’t help. Sorry! Life is really busy right now, and I’m going to beta read @seekjustice‘s book, so I don’t have enough time. *sadness*

@raevynstar Hi! I am busy so I can’t right now… But a shall tag some people… Perhaps they can help you? …
@emma-flournoy @jessi-Rae @daughteroftheking @epicaddie2 @that_writer_girl_99
@salome01w4g @his-instrument @dragon-snapper @emily @shannon

@raevynstar Oh…yeah….that would make a Labrador a problem. 😛

@daeus *dances* Yay! Destruction to telling!

Hi @raevynstar and welcome to KP! 🙂

@raevynstar Hello there! Glad you found us! If you have any questions about KP, the forums, or whatever, feel free to ask anyone!

@raevynstar I’m going to come right out and say it, I saw your profile pic and just about fell out of my chair. 😛 I LOVE TWENTY ONE PILOTS. *insert crazy fan moment here* Ok, now I’ve done that- hello!! Welcome to KP! How’d you hear about us?

@raevynstar Welcome to KP! Where do you live?

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Yes, humans. Those are the biggest monsters possible for a good story!

That is a huge truth. Humans will ALWAYS be more interesting to read about than any kind of creature. Whether they’re good or bad. 😛

@raevynstar *nods* Totally valid reason. 😉